Reviews for Chisel
ajani's apprentice chapter 38 . 6/4/2015
Yay, another chapter!

I actually totally forgot about the hooded guys.

So, Morgan know has a coat. Okay.

And Morgan has had her first Kellam moment. I love him. Him and Henry. They're two awesome characters. And Kellam is acting awesome here. Good job with the joke at Kjelle's expense.

Uh, Argent is the white one.

Well, that was stupid of the Chn'sin. Game over everyone.

Okay, the deal between Anna and Chrom was priceless. Second, why is Frederick carrying a bag of 4,000 gold with him to a meeting?

Morgan is getting power-hungry.

Is Nito supposed to be Niko, from PJO, the son of Hades?
Weaver Chance chapter 38 . 6/4/2015
Just a little error with your description of the gems and there names, The Gem names are a reference to there colour, Argent(silver) is a White gem, Sable is Black, Gules is Red, Azure is Blue, and Vert is Green, as such it is impossible for Frederick to "eye" a RED gem when the gem he was looking at can only be Argent and thus is white in colour. The colours can also be somewhat associated with where the gems were kept, White by the Exalted, Black by the Fell, Red by the Warriors(blood), Blue in the Sky(up the tree), and Green by... however one wants to describe it.
Anyway, Keep up the great work.
gokart48 chapter 38 . 6/4/2015
If you want an insufferable challenge then go with Lunatic plus. That was a lot of hell for me to complete.

As for the story, I really liked the fight scene between Morgan and Lucina, and it shows how much Morgan has learned from her mother.

It's also interesting to see the change in the Valm campaign. Since time was such a restricted factor in Robin's plans, I am interested to see how he will manage to overcome anymore obstacles since he cannot directly face the main army without being decimated as they continually march to his position.

Granted, I am skeptical about the OCs and I hope Morgan doesn't become a back up tactician in case Robin gets hurt, because while she is good, she is still unpolished with little actual combat experience. Plus that role has more responsibility than she probably realizes. However, even if those themes do pop up more than I'd like, I'm sure you will still manage to make them enjoyable.
mega-dark chapter 38 . 6/4/2015
Nito, the first of the dead...

You know, there used to be a Dark Souls crossover with Fire Emblem Awakening. For some reason it disappeared and I don't know why. Either way, the Dark Souls player that I am recognized the name. And I also need to kill that guy in my Dex run...

Either way, first time reviewing this story. I recently go into reading Fire Emblem fanfiction and saw this story recommend on tvtropes. Having nothing better to do, I gave the story a read and I've been enjoying it sense.

This chapter was a good set for what is to come. I was wondering if I saw a little bit of "Book, Blade, and Crest of Flame" in this chapter but since Lucina didn't Falcon Punch (but she did knee) Morgan I guess I'm over reading things. The planning was great and I'm going to wonder when everyone else will start to put two and two together on who Morgan's dad is.

Awesome chapter and good luck with the next one.
Guest chapter 38 . 6/4/2015
ShadowKnight394 chapter 38 . 6/4/2015
It's already been three weeks? I guess time flies when you are constantly browsing for Fire Emblem If information. Anyways, I think a few OC's are fine as long as they don't really steal the spotlight. Also, I like that you are doing a lot of hinting to Morgan's heritage. I'm kind of surprised that nobody (with the possible exception of Sumia, as she is probably trying to find evidence that Robin is Morgan's father) has pieced it together yet. I can't wait to see what you come up with next and, as always, good luck.
SuperVegitoFAN chapter 27 . 5/18/2015
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SuperVegitoFAN chapter 21 . 5/18/2015
Pissed? Nah im laughing my ass off. Slmething did seem off
Guest chapter 37 . 5/14/2015
Robin and lucina need to get together already
LongSean22 chapter 37 . 5/14/2015
Just realized I'd been following this story for a while without contributing a review for it.


Honestly, I'm REALLY liking this so far. It's definitley a "slow burn" romance, and while those can be frustrating, it just builds up the anticipation and keeps me coming back for more. Lots of genuinely funny moment too. The battles have been great so far, the ending of the last one was amazing, seriously gave me chills reading it.

As someone who has honestly never played a Fire Emblem game, and just recognizes the characters from Smash Bros. I have to say I'm certainly excited to read more from this story.

That being said, I hope you enjoy your break. Don't want you burning out on us, and real life does come first. But I'll be here, waiting anxiously for more!
Guest chapter 37 . 5/14/2015
Even after you announced the mini haitus, I found myself checking this fic anyways. I felt it, that chill in the spine. My shipping sense was tingling! The page loads and there it was in all its glory! "Updated: 6h ago" Anyways, awesome chapter, awesome Robin, awesome Morgan, and awesome Lucina. I'll look forward to the next chapter in a few weeks!
Ventrust Westwind chapter 37 . 5/11/2015
Alright, I will wait patiently until your return :) By the way, I think I found a much better name for the weapon than the one I originally messaged you about. What do you think of "Laevateinn"? xD
Alteri Luxiluna chapter 37 . 5/11/2015
Understandable. I will wait patiently for your next chapter.
ajani's apprentice chapter 37 . 5/10/2015
I hope that we get our week of updates. Take your time, this story is worth the wait.
Guest chapter 30 . 5/10/2015
Vaike. That's my boy
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