Reviews for Chisel
rubysp chapter 30 . 3/23/2015
Congratulations on writing this absolute beast of a story. From the sounds of it you're not even half way done?

I've just started the game myself so I'm deliriously happy that there is such amazing quality of fics for my otp MU/Lucina. Really appreciated for not making this into a love triangle from your first chapter.

Now that Morgan is introduced I'm really curious how Robin and the rest of the shepherds will react to this development. I can't wait for Ol'Chrom's big blowout.

Thank you for your amazing story so far and I can't wait for more chapters :)

PS: Would you ever consider delving into the Future Past story?
Greywolfian chapter 30 . 3/22/2015
Hey really enjoyed the chapter looking really good so far :D. Anyways just a small little thing you had Virion said "how is the father?" Where I think you men't to say "who is the father?" Just being a little bit of a grammar nazi lol. Also can't wait to see how Morgan is with everyone!
Naoto Koizumi chapter 30 . 3/21/2015
Great chapter :D i do wonder how robin and morgan will act around each other and if morgan wants to be a lord over a tactician. But i feel like so many people will think its robin that is the father, mainly sumia and maybe some of the future kids, but that is me. Now i just want to see how Indigo will feel when he comes in and finds out Lucina has a future daughter if he is fighting with Lucina's heart like Robin and (possibly) Genome. But i do wonder how they will know who the father is for real, i mean sure Lucina can say she is in love with Robin but she would never be sure he was the real original father really. I do hope to see what you do :D
Guest chapter 30 . 3/21/2015
So Morgan remembers Lucina instead of Robin? That's pretty cool, I really enjoy seeing the new twists you add to the story, it makes it feel like much more than a retelling.
KimranReech chapter 30 . 3/21/2015
Damn, that was a nice chapter, well not much personal space for Lucina at the beginning, very fortunate that the shepherds are a cool and understanding least if said persons are present.
Some good question from our intelligence team -means Robin,Miriel and Virion and I'm very curious whether or not Morgan is from a future were Grima has been slain...because if not...then there should be a certain Mark on her body...somewhere...well lets wait and see, even if I don't think that we will get a full on bath scene someday...hahaha
Yosei Ranbu chapter 30 . 3/21/2015
This is a surprising take on Morgan, probably the first time I've seen this approach. This leads me to think about why you would decide to take this approach, and I have to wonder... will we be seeing a certain other amnesiac time traveler down the line, only this one in his father's tactician robes?
The Greater Foo1 chapter 30 . 3/21/2015
Very well done, very well done in deed. I thought you nailed Morgan's entrance overall. Her interactions with Lucina were sweet. Comatose and shocked Chrom was pretty funny I look forward to seeing him process this and spazzing out. Lastly the Sheperds seem more resolved and are in excellent spirits, though I wouldn't be surprised if Chrom decided to line up every unmarried male character in an effort to find out who knocked up his little girl.
LiamReyes chapter 30 . 3/21/2015
Well it is a nice twist having Morgan remember Lucina but not the father. Since it's a fanficiton and not entirely beholden to the game, changes like that are fine and can create a new mystery.

This does make me wonder about the possibility of a fanfiction where the children travel back in time, but the parents from their time are in different relationships or marry entirely different people. Talk about changing the future in an unexpected way.
Legionary Prime chapter 30 . 3/21/2015
really great chapter and twist with morgan. keep up the good work
SolHikari chapter 30 . 3/21/2015
*Faints due to cuteness overload* Ok, I'm good. Wow, I absolutely love the fact that you made Morgan only remember her mother, it seems much more heartfelt than Robin saying,
"Wait, what? Never mind, to battle!"
The feels are real in this chapter, I've re-read it twice already. Morgan seems so cute here! Being a miniature version of her mother, dawwwwwww! That's the cutest thing ever! *Faints again* Must, draw, fan-art! (If you don't mind)
pokemon.rhoades chapter 30 . 3/21/2015
I'm really feeling that fhe father is Robin.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/21/2015
I'm impressed by how often this story updates. Keep up the good work.
Ftpkorn chapter 27 . 3/20/2015
Lol. It better be a Spirit Bomb! XD
Eravel chapter 26 . 3/20/2015
Just wanted to drop a quick review midway through catching up to the latest chapter :P IMO, you should keep your characters 'OOC', it's great. Robin/Lucina stories here tend to get a bit drab (goody two shoes another goody two shoes makes for a repetitive story). Not putting down the other stories out there, but taking the risk of revising personalities makes this story entertaining. It's your story, so don't feel chained to having to following the game step by step (originality is awesome!). Favorited and followed. Keep it up .
Random Reader Guy chapter 29 . 3/20/2015
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