Reviews for Chisel |
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![]() ![]() Everybody, I think we're just going to have to assume that the author won't be continuing his fanfiction. The ending of the last chapter was left wide open so another talented writer could take up the torch. Besides, Fates is out, so I don't think it would make sense to continue an Awakening fanfiction at this point, especially since we haven't even reached the first battle with Walhart. This is just my take on the situation though. Maybe a miracle will happen. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the story! Second read through and the story still hasn't been updated yet :/ not to be pesky or anything we at least have a announcement saying if you'll continue in the future or if you're dropping it. :c |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hate you right now. That was probably the first trolling that's caught me off guard on this site, and holy shit did it catch me. There I was, all warm and fluffy inside from that confession, and then out comes "lets hurry up and give sumia grandchildren." I literally just stopped and read the line several times over to make sure I hadn't made a mistake. And then it was a dream! Touche, sir and or Madame author, touche. |
![]() ![]() I... WE need another update QWQ Much cliffhanger! Much wish! |
![]() ![]() Please update soon. This story is too good to be left alone, and nobody can capture the characters quite like you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please don't be dead, please don't be dead. ... ... ... ...Oh, you thought I was talking about Lissa. No, I'm talking about you. Plz update. But yeah, I also meant Lissa. |
![]() ![]() Great story, Don't give up |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a great story! The character development and humor is phenomenal! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm only at the beginning, but this story is very interesting. Even though I've played the game a bunch and know what's going to happen, you still have a way of captivating me and making me curious as to what's happening next. The humor is top notch, too! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haven't finished the story yet, but it seems really good so far. I am concerned that there hasn't been an update in nearly 3 months. I hope that you'll be able to continue in the near future. |
![]() ![]() This story is amazing, I've been drinking your beautiful words these past few days completely enraptured by your story. I love how you have been giving the generals their own personas, Cervantes as a man of true intent and caring for his men. Pheros as someone proud of what she has been able to do, despite what disadvantages arrive her. And the battle of the burning sea, I have nothing but praise for you, you created a persona of Robin that I have never seen before, someone who wants to keep his friends alive, but does not dehumanize the enemy, he knows that each soldier has their own family, their own lives that encourages them to fight. I'm only going to lightly go over what you have done with the shepherds and the relationships you've been able to create, you've made each character genuine, I can imagine them in real life in front of me now. And I love what you've done with Henry, I am in LOVE with how you have handled him, most people write as a maniac blood obsessed man who treats everything as a joke, I mean he IS blood obsessed, but you have him as someone who cares for the shepherds, a family that truly loves him unlike his biological family, I hope show more of him and Olivia. I hope the next chapters come soon, because I am at the edge of my seat ready for the next one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is phenomenal. I've never been so entranced by a story before. I feel like Lucina speaking to Owain, in a sense. The way you're able to tell such a beautiful, enthralling story is beyond me. The imagery, character personalities, and dialogue are addictive. I can't get enough. I hope you see this story through to the end. I want to be here for it. I want to experience every heart break. I want to laugh and cry at every touching, romantic bit of fluff. I want to read it all. You've got yourself a dedicated fan. Keep up the good work! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() And the choice in which every person in power must go through, to risk the lives of many for the few or sacrifice the few for the many and no matter what choice there will be heartbreak and guilt on not only the family and friends but the one who chooses not to look at his soilders as numbers but loved once. Whatever happens I believe this will have a major impact on our heroes Second... Lucina?! What cha doing?! Giving the cold shoulder isn't how you do it! ITS RICKENS FAULT |
![]() ![]() ![]() I must say that this is a really good fic but... PLEASE DON'T TELL ME YOU STOPPED |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yavere and Durvel deserved their happy ending. |