Reviews for Full House |
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![]() ![]() ![]() What is it with Kagome? She didn't guard her heart with Inuyasha and Kikiyo; Sesshomaru's gonna hand her her ass on a platter, yet again: she went to sleep in his arms, she wakes up distinctly hearing the name of "Shirmina" on his lips whilst he still sleeping. Red Flag like a muthafucka! |
![]() ![]() OH NO YOU DIDNT FINISH IT MY LUFES OVER PLZ PLZ PLZ CONTINUE |
![]() ![]() hey its me from camp & I love the story & how its the other way around so keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think your story is very good but Tensaiga is the healing sword. And Toukiji is the sword that Sesshoumaru uses to fight with but keep it up I love your story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it |
![]() ![]() I'm sorry to say, but I just can't get into your story. The grammar needs to be improved, as well as spelling, and also maybe the way the characters act? I know that Fluffy wouldn't act that way. I did start reading your latest one, and that was good, but it doesn't make ense unless I read ths one...but its kinda hard. Maybe you could ask around for a beta reader? Kira-Jayde _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story. keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() GREAT LOVE IT AWSOME, class is almost over and i g2g pretty soon just thought i would leave a review. ~Maru out~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Quite good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh yipee this is the first KagSess fic I've read without Kag disappearing after the Shikon was completed... Then Sess comes along in the future and all those stuff... So congrats! |
![]() ![]() i havent written any other time than this... but i couldnt stop reading it was awsome! i loved all the hilarious parts. especially the "mean old fart"lol write more please! seeya! tutu monkey |
![]() ![]() OMG! that was the most... i dunno what it was... it was really great! IT MADE ME CRY! but still... kikyo and inuyasha... *sticks finger in mouth and gags* i hate kiyko! i dont have an account yet.. but i still like reading sesshie and kagome fics! keep writing! |
![]() ![]() hei. this has juss been botherin me. first u said she got the knife from Sesshomaru, then u say she got it from the father. also u sad the village. there arnt villages in japan now. also. at the beginnin u said somethin about welcome to ...something. i forget but thatz wrong too. sry. it juss bothered me. u need to keep things consistant. and u need to get ur facts straight. half the things u said didnt match up with the story Inuyasha. |
![]() ![]() ![]() beautiful work. well done 2 thumbs up! grammy winner! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful! |