Reviews for Blasted Muggle Contraptions
ninaFelton1967 chapter 4 . 12/2/2018
really liked this but it feels unfinished. one more chapter explaining what he DID do would be good.
Anonymous chapter 4 . 10/1/2018
This story is kinda interesting but I don't know if the end is a good choice...
It's quite confused when I read " she said", "he said" or " she shout" without any sentences come along, I don't know what they said, or shout, are some parts of the dialogue missing?
And, I think you may nedd quotation marks, these ones. ( ", " )
Keruxthugater chapter 4 . 11/29/2017
This is such a great story and it's soooooo funny! I love this and you so much. Don't abandon me!
Guest chapter 4 . 4/10/2016
i love this fic so sad it's abandoned
Guest chapter 4 . 12/31/2014
I'm getting confused on what is what you need "" markings around your dialogue so we know it is dialogue. also it seems you are missing parts of dialogue because you wrote 'she shouted. Do something! he said, and leaned in and kissed her'... what did he say? IT is good but it is missing pieces and it is driving me crazy. :P
Guest chapter 4 . 4/1/2014
silver dragon chapter 4 . 1/30/2014
I would of liked the story to be a bit longer... Oh well ( sighs sadly )
Guest chapter 4 . 3/25/2013
Are you planing on writing more ? If not please say so ... Like it so far ...
CocoFrijolita chapter 4 . 3/13/2013
NOOOOOO! You can't leave it at THAT! You have to come back and write MOOORRRRREEEEE! Pretty please with a gumdrop on top?!

It's amazing so far :) But I think some dialogue might be missing... Quotation marks would help the flow :)
James Beck chapter 4 . 1/6/2013
TooMuchMagic chapter 4 . 3/25/2012
Incomplete stories are becoming a trend of yours, sadly :( This was pretty interesting, it'd be nice to see it continued!
AliBelly chapter 4 . 1/29/2012
Why you no finish stories!
Don't Trust The Silver Eyes chapter 4 . 7/30/2011
GGGAAAAARRRRRRHHHH! this story must be completed! It's funny and cute and you need to use speech marks! Gosh I love it, hope you can update or complete one day
Deliriousdreamer x chapter 4 . 3/21/2011
really liked it! it's fab was disapointed to end :'(
Yesterday's Secrets chapter 4 . 1/30/2011
Gawd, you should continue this! And that is a meanie cliffie. : nope. Not happy at all. this story is very funny and i sincerely hope that you will update this.

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