|Reviews for The New Students|
| kira chapter 1 . 9/30/2017
i am speechless its amazing
| HotDogs-That-aren't-Hot chapter 1 . 9/10/2017
wrong category, would have loved to actually find what i was looking for in the place it should be, but i will not judge u for this mistake.
| Maylin100 chapter 1 . 6/17/2017
umm actually it is Marik not malik
| LuckyKittens chapter 6 . 5/19/2017
Excuse me, but could you remove the name Muhammad from this chapter? I doesn't mean to flame, but Muhammad is a prophet in Islam and any insult to him is a sacrilege in my religion. Especially in this chapter where Draco used his name as an insult. And is used by global mass with varying religion and race. So yeah. If you could please remove it and iif you really wanted to use some insult use Malik's background please. Thank you. Sorry if it's too long.
| 11SnowLeopard11 chapter 35 . 5/1/2017
I know I haven't reviewed before, but, the farther I get in this story, the more I realize how well I can understand Ryou. Perhaps it's the way you've written him, but my gods can I see the resemblance between mean and him. It's actually making me do some introspection. Aha, ignoring me though, and back to how you've written him - it seems to me like he has a combination of ADHD and autism - the former with his attention span in Charms, and the latter with social interaction and being rather good at certain subjects (genius level almost) There's undoubtedly more, but those are the most prominent ones I can think of right now.
When reading, things tend to go a lot faster than they would in reality, so it took some thinking, but Ryou going from very angry to apologetic in five minutes can actually be realistic - I know it's happened to me.
(Man typing on a phone is wired and slow af) I guess to sum this all up, would be that I praise your skill at writing Ryou Bakura's character. Hope this makes sense if you ever read it, haha.
| 11SnowLeopard11 chapter 20 . 4/30/2017
| Guest chapter 45 . 12/6/2016
Hello! Not sure if you will even glimpse at all of these review ever again but I just want to tell you, this story is incredible! I've notice that you haven't written anything else after this chapter, not even your other stories but I understand if this story will never be finished. Perhaps someone else might do a remake of this story... again... but not many can write as well as you do... but perhaps I am wrong and there are some people who are still interested in the original Duel Momster and have a talent for writing fanfic like this one. One can hope, right?
| MySweetYaoi49 chapter 45 . 10/25/2016
It has been eight years since this story was updated and I'm sure that the writers have moved on with there lives but I still really want to say how much I liked this story. I wish ot was finished but I understand loosing interested in something and or having the real world pull you away from writing fanfiction. You got to stop some time and it's just sad that this story was never completed before it was finished.
Loved the writing and the way that you combined these two worlds so well. I love the way that the characters all interact. If you actually still read these comments (which I doubt) then I would just like you to know what a great story this was and I really wish that at least we knew how you planed to end it. Cause it was looking to be quite the ending.
I'll leave you to get back to your real world life and tell you that you came up with a really amazing story idea.
| Evilkitten3 chapter 45 . 6/3/2016
This story is very good! I hope it hasn't been completely abandoned... (by the new author, I mean...)
| Yagami Kari Hikari chapter 45 . 5/25/2016
Are you going to finished the story? Because I really like the story and I want to read the next chapter, please.
| The girl who envies books chapter 4 . 5/5/2016
I've gotten curious... is the missspelling of malik's last name on purpose or accidental? Because as far as i know his name is spelled Ishtar not Ishtal.
| AusKid chapter 45 . 8/31/2015
7 years since an update, not sure if it's worth reviewing it now...I'll do it anyway. Had really low expectations going into it, but everything was superb. Characters and extended universe blended seamlessly, the tone was consistent, the plot pacing was fine, and some well crafted scenes (most memorably for me Kaiba/Dumbledore). Snape isn't portrayed like an incompetent maniac, even Malfoy gets the upper hand at times, you weren't afraid for your protagonists to show weakness which is a huge ff problem.
As far as criticisms go, I don't have anything too concrete. Some spelling errors that didn't get pulled by spell-check (wear/where, there/their, smart aleck/smart elect). Maybe Yami Bakura is a little too emotional for believability, although I understand it helps create conflict. Uh...maybe more Duel Monsters? It was a really great story, you (both) should be very proud.
To other reviewers, don't be tools, it's clearly a fic old enough to transcend the cross-over classifications.
| Ryoko Ishida chapter 41 . 5/15/2015
I'm kinda sad you stopped this story, but I enjoyed it while it lasted. :)
| Ryoko Ishida chapter 21 . 5/14/2015
| Ryoko Ishida chapter 13 . 5/14/2015
Gosh-dangit Malik! You're hard to love, but you're harder to hate. I'm kidding I LOVE YOU!