Reviews for Red Cobra
New R2D2 chapter 2 . 1/7/2015
This very well written, although their are the standard spelling/grammar errors occasionally, but I like how this is a realistic approach by the UNSC and Humanity, keep up the good work.
Sightbent chapter 2 . 1/7/2015
I'm really looking forward to seeing this story continue.
Sightbent chapter 1 . 1/7/2015
Interesting first chapter. There's already a good amount of mystery.
SmokeTinyTom chapter 2 . 1/7/2015
Impressive build up.
Will the UNSC show it's true strength at Shanxi (UNSC Infinity) or will the Arbiter's CSO-Supercarriers put the Citadel in its place. After denying to join the Citadel.
six samurai of dragon order chapter 2 . 1/6/2015
what about my story, it doesn't follow what you said. I checked, you don't follow it, is something wrong with it? 'We need a Miracle' is the title. Go check it out, humanity is not nice, when they show up.
jabbarulez chapter 2 . 1/6/2015
Interesting idea. When in the halo timeline does this take place?
tick-toc-tick chapter 2 . 1/6/2015
Interesting start. I'm going to look forward to see where you go with this.
blacklight666 chapter 2 . 1/6/2015
What are you going to do with the Covenant. I always wanted to see a fic where the UNSC turn all or some races into client rases. Not equals mind you but true clients of the UNSC , for instance the Elites in a civil war loose control of a few Grunt breeding colonies and either ONI or the UNSC takes control. Or something like that. Basically you should not have a fully functional covenant sepertist goverment were all races are equal. Grunts were basically slave and the Jakels aren't trusted. For any help with this loke fore another cross over of this category called The Three Enpires for help with this it gives more details than I can . Hope you continue with this.
douchiesnacks chapter 2 . 1/6/2015
cant wait for more!
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