Reviews for Framed & Fractured
jiewen2881 chapter 6 . 12/17/2017
OMG I really like your story! I am on the tip of my seat, waiting for what will happen next. Each character have its own characterization and thoughts and the repetition is so eerie.
Insidious1604 chapter 6 . 11/24/2017
This is quite lovely. A breath of fresh air if you will. I love the mood you create - it is subtle as well, a rarity these days I find.
Kakariki chapter 6 . 11/12/2017
Fantastic! Generally, I get irritated with stories that leave hints and dance around knowledge because I want to KNOW. But, I'm so enthralled with what you're painting that I really don't mind at all.
Nyx the Author chapter 6 . 11/8/2017
This is really deep, kinda trippy. I look forward to how it will progress.
Ijoan chapter 6 . 8/31/2017
The story started off a bit rushed and unrefined in some spots...but I love the narrative that you're building. It's original and fresh. There are interwoven story lines. As a reader I get the sense that everything is connected but without any obvious ideas as to how...the tension that you've built keeps me invested despite the lack of romance. :)
HRTG1027 chapter 6 . 8/19/2017
I can't even express how amazing this story is to me. This is just completely awesome and different from any other story I've ever read. I can't wait to read more. :)
Enigmaticrose4 chapter 6 . 8/17/2017
This story is so different from any I've ever read. I'm looking forward to seeing what you do to it.

And that librarian is creepy.
Enystis chapter 6 . 8/11/2017
This is exciting! I am very excited! So many things that are uncrear and mysterious, I love it! I hope you honor us humble readers with more of your excellent writing, and I thank you for this amazing story! So thank you.
Eresys chapter 6 . 6/28/2017
This story is delightful.
I don't even try anymore to resolve the riddle, no pun intended, of the situation you placed the characters in, and just get swept along for the ride.
Your writing is sharp and concise, and you seem to have a lot of plot twists up your sleeve.
I look forward to read the next chapter as I'm always pleasantly surprised at what you come up with.
Thank you.
captain kink chapter 6 . 6/24/2017
Your story is breathtaking, I want to know what's going to happen with characters so much. Please, don't forget about updating it! We, readers, will not forget checking for new chapters - it's a promise! (-_-)
Michelle chapter 6 . 6/17/2017
Honestly you have to keep writing this story! It's sooo good and i dont know if this is abandoned, but it'd be sad if it were
Anonsense chapter 5 . 6/11/2017
You've got a nice creepy atmosphere going on.

Kinda hoping Harry will get mistaken for the ghost of Slytherin somehow, by virtue of parseltongue.
Guest chapter 6 . 5/31/2017
Waw, this is a great story, with a very unique and interesting point of view ! I can't wait for the next chapter thx a lot for giving me such a nice reading experience !
MessyBargainer chapter 6 . 5/28/2017
I'm in love. I can't stop drinking this story in, you're literally giving me mental sugar highs with how sweet this mystery story is. Thank you for writing, I look forward to see how future chapters progress the story :)
Xxx chapter 6 . 5/21/2017
Honestly I can't stop reading this, I alwas come back to it and I remember accidentally coming across this last year, and I am so glad I did. I immediately fell in love with the concept, and it was so different from the regular time travel fics with Harry changing Tom in some sense. In this fic it's not intentional, Harry's time travel is accidental and the development of his character refusing to have anything to do with Tom is just so refreshing.

And I absolutely adore the way you wrote Tom in this, it exposes the process of his thinking, and I fucking love it. When I read his thoughts it's like "yeah Tom would actually think that way." And it makes you think of the calculative similarities with him and Sherlock. They're both very distant from their emotions, and every person, every scenario has a formula that leads to the desired answer and JDBEKWHSBEJBE
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