Interesting

I'd go on a mass killing spree to get chapter 7!

I liked this chapter and story as a whole. I haven't came across an idea like it, I do hope you continue at some point. I do wonder who pulled Harry into the painting if it was empty. Or was it by him coming in sometime was let out?

I love the way you write! This is an awesome story. I love Avery and Lestrange too. I do wish there was more interaction between Tom and Harry!

I LOVE THAT LAST LINE FROM TOM! So perfectly him.

Hey, very interesting stuff. Surprisingly suspenseful. if the muse returns, I'd love to read more :)

Wow...this is amazing...
Tbh I've never read fanfiction this good!

this is so creepy i love it

This is a really interesting story, it's so unique and I have no idea where it is going and really want to know. You write very well. Thank you for sharing it with us, I hope you'll come back to it at some point.

Ok. I’ve reviewed before. But this is for the story as a whole and it’s sort of a half plea for you to continue this absolute work of art and me fangirling over said work of art.
Because seriously this is DEFINITELY a work of art. I mean I read this years ago when it was only about four chapters and I still remember it and wanted to read it again even if it wasn’t done. And when Harry finds out that something is in the room with him? Shivers of pure fear down my spine. Seriously. I looked around my own room suspiciously. This is my favorite kind of horror book. The suspense. The mystery. The underlaying sense of fear that you can’t quite put your finger on the cause. And then the multiple plot lines that will eventually intersect to make a beautiful hauntingly gorgeous spiderweb of plot in the end. * sighs happily* even if you never wrote a single word again I would still come back and read this, it’s that good even as a cliff hanger.

Chapter six was awesome! I could definitely tell you tried (and succeeded) hard with dumbledores scene. It’s one of the very best dumbledore scenes I’ve ever read. Canon included.

This story is such intense ! The writing is perfect, the plots mysterious, the characteres have many layers of depth, torments and secrets.

This is pretty good I wish I knew where you where taking this tho. I like it

The Vengeful Spirit Avery feeds,
The Thief bringing golden treats,
The watches grinded into pieces
That Spirit eats to bar the ghosts
Who haunt boy - his father's words.

This mystery of souls lost thus intersects
With blackness marked of illegal trade
In substances that crouch under skin
Of fools who treat unknown pool within
With brazenness of spoiled kids, of rich,
Whom of consequences no one had time to teach.

Who is the Ghost? Who was he before
The legend he became and warning?
What does he want, besides the gold,
That he is given by the poor lost soul?
Is he related in a way to the portrait
That cages Harry and yet saves
Him from certain death, uncertain life?

May Harry's presence tilt the strife
Within Tom's plans from madness rife
Within the plan to split one's soul?

Is the drug Dust - the substance left behind
By ghosts who were eaten by the Vengeful?
Or are the ones who substance take
The fuel for it to further propagate?

Thank you. Good day, good night, and good luck.

Holy crap what a beaut I can't believe it's been years since I hope you're well and I look forward to the rest of the story 3 I remember reading this back in highschool and loving it a whole lot