Reviews for A Little More Than A Homecoming
OptimisticGirl chapter 16 . 5/31/2015
I was so happy to see an update for this! I have a soft spot for time traveling fics and yours is one of my favorites. LOVED this chapter and how you integrated all the canon stuff from season 4 in! Can't wait to see Emm and Killian interact with their future selves!
Relliurad chapter 15 . 5/4/2015
I just wanted to commend you on a fantastic story. I've just read it all the way through and it's really great. I can't wait to read more.
kay1 chapter 15 . 4/29/2015
Oh I am blown away with the way your talking this story.
awesomeeeee.
Love that new u twist.
cant wait for next update :)
OptimisticGirl chapter 15 . 4/28/2015
Oh my god I was so hoping they would go to the future! Is it bad I kind of want present Emma to have to distract future Killian like she did past Hook?
The Corsair's Quill chapter 15 . 4/28/2015
WHUT.
Bloody fuck that was an amazing chapter! My mind is riddled with everything that can go wrong and I seriously want to shake Emma and go "what have you done?" *cue horrified gasp*

I love, love, LOVE this. So please update fast.*puppy dog eyes*
onetreefan chapter 14 . 4/12/2015
so good!
onetreefan chapter 13 . 3/2/2015
so great!
Kou Shun'u chapter 11 . 2/24/2015
A, she tells henry that is stepdad is captain hook, but she doesn't tell him his greatgrandpa is pan. That would totallly boggle his mind.
Kou Shun'u chapter 10 . 2/24/2015
Soooo if henry thinks the story is them, does he think that they are changing an event into fairyland details? Or does he believe in his mom being a princess and killian a pirate?
Aslo lily is full of herself. Her parents are definately better story tellers. She just does a summary.
Kou Shun'u chapter 8 . 2/24/2015
Hmmmmmm an eightyr old saying "mindless drone" is okay but "uncanny ability"?
I'm suprised that henry doesn't even think of the posibility that lily is his half sister who grew up with killian and henry was made to never know about it.
I appreciate these nice long chapters.
Kou Shun'u chapter 7 . 2/24/2015
how horrid and cowardly of gold! To do that to a child! Though it sucks it didn't work since I was really pissed at ouat for killing him off. They keep getting rid of chars that make things somewhat difficult , huh?
BridgetWalker19 chapter 12 . 2/21/2015
You r brilliant! U obviously put a great of thought and planning into this story. please post more soon. :)
onetreefan chapter 12 . 2/21/2015
great job
DarkRoseShadow chapter 12 . 2/21/2015
Firstly I just need you to squish you in cyber hug...

And then I wanna squeal for the update... And just flow tears for the beautiful writing..

It was pure bliss... No other words can suffice...

"He wouldn't… He would have told me that. He explained I wouldn't exist, I'm sure he would have told me that." Lily swallowed painfully. She felt the reverberating sense of betrayal choke her up.

I didn't understand the particular as to what he told lily and what he didn't...

And then this one.. "There is no bloody way in Hell that crocodile is looking at her, let alone badgering her with questions!" He rejected "If you can't come up with them they won't bloody well be asked." Killian finalized his declaration by leaving the study and heading down the staircase.

I didn't understand the second dialogue and the questions thingy...

What I absolutely loved was how you showed the sibling bond... And the Regina part was just soo amazing and beautiful... So heartbreaking.. I love how tenacious you showed henry to be.. But at the same time didn't lose the element of his childhood...

Pure bliss... The words were completely absorbing...
fox24 chapter 12 . 2/21/2015
I love it
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