Reviews for Promises, the HyLarryous Version
blackarrowprime94 chapter 6 . 3/7/2022
Good fic though
blackarrowprime94 chapter 6 . 3/7/2022
Not a fan of how practically all the girls are now, in one way or form, almost pining after Jaune when they KNOW that yang has claim on him, especially disappointed with how Ruby was acting
seanjoshmassey chapter 10 . 12/29/2021
Loved the story, hated the ending. Pyrrha doesn't deserve forgiveness even a little bit and Jaune deserved some actual catharsis. He should have told her to get fucked. Aside from that, I really loved everything else here, you did an amazing job with the characters.
Grannster10 chapter 5 . 10/9/2021
i want to see pyrrha see jaune again and her reaction
lightweaver89 chapter 10 . 10/8/2021
I did love this story except for the ending to be honest. It would have felt much more satisfying for him to ignore Pyrrha and Yang to tell her to fuck off. At least then hopefully she would have seen what she missed out on. Thanks for all your hard work and taking the time to finish this.
Scruffy01373 chapter 10 . 8/23/2021
It is great.
PaperView chapter 10 . 8/22/2021
It was an amazing story
I enjoyed all of it!
paink1ller chapter 10 . 8/22/2021
Glad to ready a ending, thanks for that
Robbler chapter 10 . 8/22/2021
...Don't like the ending at all.
It's your story though, so congrats for finishing it xD
MrTexHex chapter 10 . 8/22/2021
Yo homie. After all them years of waiting. Totally worth it. Any future stuff you working on?
Trooper11B chapter 10 . 8/21/2021
I’m glad you came back to finish the story. Thanks and for what it’s worth it is a good story in my opinion.
BlackQrow chapter 10 . 8/21/2021
Thank you for finishing it, it was a great journey.
DasFlo96 chapter 10 . 4/6/2021
so u decided on a cliffhanger for something we all waited for and than also decide to not continue really man thisbis a dick move and i am really trying to stay polute here otherwise this would be a much more aggressive review... i was so into it and u oull this bullshit... i wanted to check out ur other worls but if u pull stunts like this i better dont
Guest chapter 10 . 2/21/2021
2021, still waiting for the next chapter to come out
Guest chapter 10 . 12/21/2020
"Yeah this story is pretty much dead. Sorry."

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