Elizabeth at least knows more how to lower Mr Darcy’s delirious high fever.

Hello writer. This is an excellent story.
But the Matlocks should have placed the marriage announcement in the newspaper.
My biggest gripe is that you failed to call out the gossiping jealous Charlotte Lucas, and in so doing, Elizabeth didn't see her gossiping jealous side. That, for me, spoiled an excellent story.

Surprised that the bitch Bingley is telling Elizabeth that it's not appropriate for her to be there.

Bingley is a sod, much like his sister. Guess the insipid untalented Jane is suited to an immature excitable puppy Bingley.

Did Mrs Thompson want Darcy to get her approval before her married

Charlotte the gossiping ugly spinster. It was a travesty that you wrote her up in chapter 15 digging for much more information and it was shameful that you didn't write a smarter Elizabeth who saw through a gossiping jealous Charlotte.

The bastard Fitzwilliams should be reminded that Darcy is the Head of his own family and that he's NOT answerable to Lord and Lady Matlock

The Matlocks, including their second son Colonel Fitzwilliam, were mercenary bastards.

Uglyface Charlotte Lucas is such a gossip. A 27 years she's jealous spiteful ugly woman

**** Highest rating! Well told and original story. Thank you!

Just recently discovered this lovely story,thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

I just read this all in one night and I loved it! Super fabulous!

Old lady Charlotte is a gossip wanting to know every detail of the Bennets and she's spiteful because she's stuck with Collins.

What happened to the letters Bishop Darcy told the Matlocks to write, or the public announcement?

Why is the cunt Colonel still intruding? Is he waiting for more money from Darcy?
As for the pathetic bitch Elizabeth, her family are a disgraceful lot yet the bitch wants him to go there so her harridan mother can talk about pin money!
Cunt writer