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Wow!

The FUCK was this...

So uhh… I know this chapter is old but the way you handled this interaction between Aizen’s side and Ichigo was ATROCIOUS. Showing the full release of all 4 of Ichigo’s zanpakto only to be beaten by Gin and Gin alone was an awful decision. You could have made him delayed and have Aizen escape unhindered. But Ichigo was taken down like a bitch, an uninjured Ichigo at that. I like the story up to this point but this was horrible.

Jidanbo just recited the Seireitei zip code lol

Listen, I honestly believe Tatsuki deserved so much more in canon and honestly she would have made a better pairing than Orihime.

More please

Step 1. Find promising story.
Step 2. It's great so read whole story in 3 days.
Step 3. 'Follow' it to know immediately when it will be updated.
Step 4. Check when it was updated last time.
Step 5. Notice, the story has been dead for the last decade.
Step 6. Be sad.

lol wow never saw their interactions as romantic at all

honestly i can see yoruichi getting flustered. most women who enjoy teasing the innocent get flustered when it is turned around on them by those innocents

lame. for how strong ichigo depicted in this story yet he failed to kick one of aizen's lackey? pathetic

Please continuous is very nice

Oh, Yoruichi fucked up. She is messing with emotions of other people that I'm not even sure she herself understands. With her "iT SoUnDs LiKe A CrUsH tO Me."

Really love this story can't wait for new chapters

I really want more of this.
This is really unique because it shows the animosity and certainly not honorable competition between WOMEN (not girls) over the same man.
It's a breath of fresh air, especially when most other stories would just have them agree to share and be fine/cordial with each other super quickly and easily, that is, without a period of fighting between them.
Same goes when you've shown that people have different sides/behaviour around different people and in different circumstances. Yoru being the prime example here.
The boatload of zanpakutos for ichi I think is unnecessary, it's like you're choosing quantity over quality and depth, like it'd be with other reapers.
Remember souls are malleble/mutable, as the zanpakutos are connected to each reaper or even the respers' themselves they themselves can change and their abilities grow and evolve too and not only in scale or power.
Other than that I love the dialogue and interactions they're great.
Same for the bsttles, their descriptions are top-notch.
I hope I helped with constructive criticism.
Over and out

Buena historia