Reviews for Savage
jbadillodavila chapter 1 . 5/18
Buena historia
PJ Storyteller chapter 1 . 3/15
Honestly I don’t know why I’m even commenting when you’ve already abandoned the story years ago but I will. The story had a good start and a good plot but I agree with the many who comments that your writing started to downhill from the soul sword ark. Though in my opinion it was from ch 11. Your writing has definitely improved same with your grammar which is what is important. I just hated what you did with the romance and the character development of Ichigo though especially in CH 28 that was in my opinion a terrible chapter one of the worsts in this story. It reminds me of many teen drama unrealistic tv show shit. A plot style that many amateur writers make. I would focus on studying the habits of what a real relationship and real interaction would look like instead of some fantasy. I don’t mean to sound rude it’s just my own unbiased observation from reading your piece you definitely have talent in the top 5 percent in fact but your presentation was dreadful. I think you have something don’t know if you will read this but I hope this helped. Thank you.
LL chapter 28 . 2/12
Wow! This done story right here! Love the interactions between ichigo, soi fon, and suzemebachi. Wish you continued this story
kmate1222 chapter 28 . 2/3
The plot thickens!
darthkratos24 chapter 2 . 12/23/2021
Go without them... You know that's a retarded idea right? Story wise at least because now you have 13 captains and vice-captains all barring down on one one to distract them no one to take their focus? What kind of brain dead moron would do that? Then you have a few pissed friends to deal with that will most likely never talk to him again. There's no way they can grow together like on canon and if you wanted a romance like you've been hinting at with at least one or two of them now that would never work especially in a realistic sense because they'll always know he never trusted them, they'll always think he'd leave them at the first point... Killed your own story on the second chapter good job
Doso thabo chapter 12 . 12/15/2021
Ichigo harem
taiwoeretan1 chapter 3 . 12/11/2021
Man Ichigo is going to be so OP in this.
Hoguie chapter 11 . 10/18/2021
Really? All he got for fusing four effing zanpakuto is stabbed twice by Gin?
Dk676 chapter 28 . 9/19/2021
Please continue
Dk676 chapter 28 . 9/19/2021
Please continue
Nevarus chapter 2 . 9/14/2021
seemed more like a tomboy friend protecting an innocent friend from creeps because of her assets. don't understand how you could take it the other way... also almost guarantee that the creeper girl who feels up orihime isn't really gay, it's just a thing that some girls do to one another in anime...
Partha Lahiri chapter 1 . 7/31/2021
brasheril-holmestalentsmaster chapter 28 . 7/30/2021
I'd say this is among the top 10, perhaps even top 5 Bleach fanfics I've ever read. Congratulations.

I really want to see what comes next.
I especially love how you develop the girls individually.

PS: post this on AO3 too, but make each arc into s single chapter, it's going to be better for us to follow and comment on it as the feedback system there is better.
Guest chapter 28 . 7/13/2021
Natsworthy chapter 1 . 5/21/2021
yo we need an update on this ASAP
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