|Reviews for Rhymes with Shmaliens|
| chaoswizard chapter 7 . 2/8
Keep it comimrg please it has a good story line to it.
| SeanHicks4 chapter 7 . 2/5
Strangely familiar... looking forward to seeing Xander in one of the SG teams...making sure I flag it this time.
| Riniko22 chapter 2 . 2/4
It appears that Xander will be lucky that he is being watched by the first group.
| Leicontis chapter 7 . 2/3
Happy to hear that you're following up on a fun fic! Best wishes for your original novels as well - my wife transitioned from fanfiction to short-format original fiction a couple years back, and I've seen a lot of other FFNet authors talk about their original work, so I can totally understand you being busy on other (potentially profitable) projects.
| Suzululu4moe chapter 4 . 4/7/2016
ahaha old man Jack seeing Xander in action.
| Suzululu4moe chapter 3 . 4/7/2016
Man with balls of steel.
| Suzululu4moe chapter 2 . 4/7/2016
Poor Xander. Though I wouldn't be suprised if she used some scrying spell or something
Darth willow would murdervthem and their family.
| Suzululu4moe chapter 1 . 4/7/2016
Xander Harris and the bout of occupational craziness.
Lol Xander and the tent statement .
I hope willow like gives him a magical detox or cleaning down.. It's been a long time since it's been in his mouth.
| Tsamoka chapter 6 . 12/13/2015
This was fun to read. I can't wait to see the sequels. Keep up the good work! :)
| Twilight Dusk chapter 1 . 12/4/2015
You realize if you've got the Colonel, Xander, and Jon running around there's just way too much of Jack, right?
| rednaxela12 chapter 1 . 10/19/2015
I truly hope to find a sequel to this posted at some point. it is Quite good.
| Nate chapter 1 . 9/22/2015
Ugh - So SG1 gets off with ignoring orders again? Yeah piss on this shit.
| Noooo Aime chapter 6 . 9/15/2015
Hoooo that was great ! I love it !
Une fan ;)
| Niki chapter 1 . 9/6/2015
| Aspen Tsavorite chapter 6 . 7/12/2015
Thank you! I enjoyed your story. Very amusing and I think in-character Xander. The storyline was also amusing and seemed plausible to me too. I did think Daniel was a little bit ooc - he seemed a bit more wooden than I think of him. Otherwise, it is an interestig story that flows pretty well, and I think you used the different scenes to introduce the characters to each other well and make a fun story to read. I hope you keep enjoying writing!