Yeah, not cool making sun wukong the villain.

Because, Goku

This is fun!

you can polish this turd as much as you want, im tired of all of these fics on here with condescension for sg1. "great work against the system lords and all, but let the PROFFESIONALS handle the real shit."

I Love snappy sarcasm

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Loved it. I always love the stories that have Jack and Xander in them because i can see how alike they are. This was well done and I loved the interactions between them. I would love to see more from you.

Keep it comimrg please it has a good story line to it.

Strangely familiar... looking forward to seeing Xander in one of the SG teams...making sure I flag it this time.

It appears that Xander will be lucky that he is being watched by the first group.

Happy to hear that you're following up on a fun fic! Best wishes for your original novels as well - my wife transitioned from fanfiction to short-format original fiction a couple years back, and I've seen a lot of other FFNet authors talk about their original work, so I can totally understand you being busy on other (potentially profitable) projects.

ahaha old man Jack seeing Xander in action.

Man with balls of steel.

Poor Xander. Though I wouldn't be suprised if she used some scrying spell or something

Darth willow would murdervthem and their family.

Xander Harris and the bout of occupational craziness.

Lol Xander and the tent statement .

I hope willow like gives him a magical detox or cleaning down.. It's been a long time since it's been in his mouth.

This was fun to read. I can't wait to see the sequels. Keep up the good work! :)