i liked this a lot. It was touching and seemed accurate, though a little awkwardly written.

This is sooooooooooo painful! My heart hurts :'-(

Great story, though. Now, excuse me while I try not to sob my eyes out...
Legolin :)

This is amazing! I love how you captured Makalaure's pain, anguish, despair and regret. And the Silmaril. Thank you for doing this :D

Oh my. Maglor. Poor Maglor. This will never not hurt.
*sobs quietly in a corner*