Reviews for Magic and Monsters
Hyperion571 chapter 4 . 11/19
You are also missing letters in some words like the 'e' in 'after'
Hyperion571 chapter 5 . 11/19
The story is nice but you have to have someone else check your grammar, you misspelled "drapes" as "rapes", and we we know what both words mean.
Primalparadox8 chapter 1 . 7/1
Why oh why would you use such a setting while making your MC some kind of eunuch virgin? Are you Japanese?
Monster King chapter 18 . 6/23
Awesome
Naruto-DXD6996 chapter 18 . 6/7
NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I LOVED THIS STORY!
Aisune chapter 18 . 2/13
Sad but great story good luck with your novel
AvidReader2425 chapter 3 . 1/9
Thanks for the chapter
AvidReader2425 chapter 2 . 1/9
Thanks for another interesting chapter
AvidReader2425 chapter 1 . 1/9
Definitely an enjoyable start to the story, thanks
K chapter 18 . 12/4/2020
I wish you a grand future, and wish that you write your book, if you keep your name the same I might just have to read it. Take care and good luck.
Matsu chapter 18 . 12/1/2020
Please update soon I look forward to reading more
DainBramagedMoFo chapter 11 . 11/27/2020
It's okay. The chapters aren't very different from Mon Girls source product. Nothing new here.
ChaosOmega98 chapter 18 . 11/16/2020
Please don’t stop updating this even if it is only in your free time as I believe only you can write this story and look up to seeing a new chapter written by you
AnimeGoji91 chapter 18 . 11/10/2020
That ok you did great job for your story and also kick ass too!?
Nahilius Ocran Viet Artur chapter 18 . 11/10/2020
I wish you luck and hope to read your published works. Just remember about us when you make it big.
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