You gonna update this EVER? this story has been sitting like this for 4 years now you going for 5 vacant years?! if this is abandoned SAY SO!

The heavy RVB reference and fight was amazing and the fact it somewhat fits in with the universe setting is amazing. Even the characters line up slightly.

I'm guessing this has been put on hold, while you work on other projects?

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Please please finish this while you work on star bound!

This is quite the ride. This is shaping up to be an incredibly good story.

But what I really think would make for interesting complications for Kerrigan and Raynor is that after the collector base is destroyed Raynor accidentally get Kerrigan pregnant with twins. This leads into a phase where the two realize with the Harvester war coming on, they would need to plan on contingencies that would protect the infant twins and this is where Mar Sara comes in handy. By putting the children and any supporting Terran and Zerg personnel there to watch over them, they can then focus on the war on the horizon.

Would make for interesting storytelling!

This was pretty good... until I got to the line about the Terrans finding Asari disgusting. Ironically, that is far less believable than actual psychic powers.

There is no goddamn way that the entirety of humanity would find Asari disgusting. It's utterly impossible and unbelievable. Seriously, you could say the Terrans discovered actual magic in this sci-fi fic and it'd more believable than this.

Muffins sound really good right now

I think I like the Quarians, Krogan, Drell, and the Elcor the most.

I really look forward to whenever you continue this story, things were really getting interesting when you paused.

I still don't know why you went with the "Shep died and Amon replaced him" narrative when you could have just gone with "Shep picked up a hitchhiker" instead. I think that would have made more sense.

After all, Shep still walks, talks, and acts like Shep. Saying someone who looks like Shep, has Shep's memories, and his personality ISN'T actually Shep is just weird to me. At that point, what difference is there between not-Shep and actual Shep if all those metrics are the same before and after?

You killed off the Keepers? Why? The Protheans altered them to no longer respond to the signal of the Reapers.

Are you ever going to continue this? This story got me into fan fiction in the first place

Dang! Just read through this entire story over the past few days, and it's been so cool! To see Mass Effect and Starcraft blended together, and in such an amazingly well done way- just wow! Man, I have so much that just- it left my mind whirring trying to think on everything, but in a good way!

First of all, I just love how the protoss are done. I know they're not the main focus, but it's just so cool to see the protoss so well done. There's Artanis who every time he appears I'm just so happy to see him (he's my favorite StarCraft character, admittedly). I just love the characterization for him in this story, hopeful but still wary and more than ready to act should he need too. Then Zeratul, just vibing as a mentor figure. Speaking of mentors, it is kind of funny to imagine what Artanis might have felt upon realizing that Tassadar is a Xel'naga, when Tassadar was also Artanis' mentor. Happens sometimes.

But also, just with Aaron Amon Shepherd- did not expect that! Well, until there was the Sovereign thing, and it was like 'oh yeah he's kinda got Amon in him, doesn't he?' But before that, didn't expect it! That's a really spooky and neat idea itself, honestly. Kind of seems like there's some remnants of Amon's personality though? At least echoes of it, given when he touched minds with Sovereign and it looked like some remnants were rather unhappy. Kind of scary to think about if those were to come forward and take control or something. Ohhhh, and while it might not happen, probably won't given you decided to keep the Khala, but the idea of Aaron being controlled, and then those remnants taking over the Protoss' Khala similar to LotV? Now that's rather scary.

Anyways! I could ramble about how much I love this story all day, from Aaron's relationships with the crew like Tali', Garrus, and Kasumi, or ramble about how cool the alliance is, or callibrations- but I'm gonna sum it up in: I Love this story! It was such a fun read, and maybe I'll just read through again, because that's just how cool it is

Yay, almost in the end game now! Also I know 'Tassadar' loves his secrets and all that shit, but sad that even my boy Zeratul is not part of this conference.

Also huh, is he going to be turned into a Xel'naga? Like, I can think that having Amon's essence in him can be thought of a fluke of a cosmic proportions but him technically having not both Purity of Form and Essence would be. Like, him having Purity of Form is something considerable in the low ground given he is barely surviving Xel'naga essence even just a small amount but Purity of Essence is something not a Terran like him can possibly be qualified of.

Anyways, sad that the current updates only reached this point but I'm patient when the next update arrives and I can't wait!