Reviews for Cycles Upon Cycles |
---|
![]() ![]() ![]() Kerrigan still worrying about Jim...grow up. Worry about the Zerg. Can't go too far out. More. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was great. keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope to hear more from you, and that you still have a roof over your head. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought this story was abandoned. |
![]() ![]() Boss battle! I don't suppose Shepard and co. have a spare Odin lying around somewhere? Anyway, love to see this update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice, down two assholes. But while trying to stop Cerebus, the Reapers now attack! Oh, not one thing, it's another. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was brilliantly done and I just loved that Brooks and Kai Leng are dead. The fact that the Strikers used Cerebus's obsession against them was glorious and showed brilliantly thinking on their part. They were so focused on the Strikers they forgot about other forces that could intervene like the Alliance. Not going to lie I can't wait to see Cerebus completely destroyed and wiped out from the board. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I see the red vs blue inspiration in the ghost fight, not that I minded I enjoyed the chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are we talking Harvester Capital Ship or Harvester Destroyer? |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice chapter thx for writing it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Huh, I bet the citadel is crap get itself over the new Krogan |
![]() ![]() ![]() If you’re gonna poke a bear, better take it to dinner first. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I had the idea. What if the Xel'naga realized that only a being of their power could stand against a harvester so created a plan so that there would be a being that could stand against the harvesters. They created nanites that would affect everyone and everything in th K sector. Tasadar created the artifact to start the process of allowing a mortal being to use the power of a Xel'naga. There are 5 requirements for full control of the power. 1. Being hit by a dieing Xel'nagas power, 2. Using that power subconsciously, 3. Using the power consciously. 4. Being made aware of where the power comes from and 5. A Xel'naga structure responding to the power without a Xel'naga being present. |
![]() ![]() Well, you’re off to a good start, this is really good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() My friend, I have read most of your stories and they are really good, with the largest mistake being a misspelled word. But you must know something. There is no such thing as overkill. Only fire and reload. Great story looking forward to reading the next chapter. |