|Reviews for Three times he intended to ask her to marry him and one time he did|
| Sarahjisbon chapter 1 . 1/6
Gosh.. you made me cry .. loved it..
| Depends-On-The-Lie chapter 1 . 6/22/2015
This made my cry like REALLY hard
| alicja.krompiewska chapter 1 . 1/20/2015
Oh the hell.
You knock me down. I'm just crying like a baby.
I know that feelings felt by Marcus and I am so touched.
I'm impressed. Keep going.
| Trinity23Rose chapter 1 . 1/17/2015
really liked it though my hearts breaks for MArcus
| untapdtreasure chapter 1 . 1/14/2015
I. Wow. Talk about heartbreak. That just about killed me. I cannot believe she'd cheat on him with Jake. II. Wow. I guess Marcus deserved to do that on their wedding day considering Jake stole her from in the first place. It was a passionate kiss. I could feel it with the words. III. Oh damn. I want to slap the hell out of Jake. I mean, he's having a baby, and he can't even be bothered to show up. LOL. IIII. Aww. That is absolutely perfect. I love it. It's a happy ending. 3
I do have to suggest that you use a beta or look it over once more to fix mistakes. Like you call Jake Jack at one point. LOL. I'm a beta for this ship so if you need help, let me know.