It’s been so long since you’ve updated absolutely desperate to find out what happens would genuinely pay money to read this completed please consider making a patrion or taking donations xx

Had to take a breather after that… i am DYING to find out what the forfeit is! When that question came up before i did wonder about it, clearly it got under her skin more than any of the others so im glad it was asked again but also ouchi wanted to cry for Sarah because of it. Sometimes you’re so strong you’re brittle but those broken edges will hopefully be sharp enough to make their own impression on everyoneLove this story, I’m so glad you still write for it!

Shiver… this is where i got to last time i read this sotry and im on the edge of my seat now. Im glad we got to see Sarah in full feral mode, really losing her shit, just as i am glad to see a sliver of… repentance(?) on the side of Jareth. Maybe he finally is starting to realise what he might lose in all of this, and sarah is hopefully starting to get to know what strength ks at her core. This is by far my favourite fanfic and i wish one day to read it (completed!) in paper form so that it can sit on my bookshelf beside the other greats!

Ooohwahahahaha! Love this chapter…. On my umpteenth re-read in order to reaquaint myself with new chapters lying in wait and boy am i glad i started at the beginning again! Its like revisiting old friends, and old yet delicious villains. That bit in the chair… and the anticipation of his revenge for her sneakiness… ok, im off to the next chapter…

Oh I devoured this. There is magic in your stories.

I came fresh from TGM, so it took a few chapters to adjust. Not in any negative way, and there lies the beauty in how you write. The only disappointment I felt reading this is there have not been recent updates. But that is very understandable given the state of the world, and what we all have gone through and are going through in our respective lives. I hope that you are well and finding pockets of joy every day. Your writing certainly has brought joy into my life, and I am so thankful for you for that. I do hope you continue with this story if you find the time to update. Thank you for sharing your writing and this story!

I. Fricking. LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH.

And I screamed at the end of this chapter. I've been reading this since maybe chapter 13 came out, and I am so happy that you continue to update this.

The dialogue between Jareth and Sarah, the Viking gods, the smut, the story. I just love all of it. I will be so sad when it's over, but still so glad it has an ending.

I've been reading your stories for days.. almost all of them now. Weirdly enough, I found your name on Tiktok in the comments section of a video for a fantasy book series. Many people were claiming your name, and I was not disappointed. You've rekindled a passion in me for reading and fantasy, I've been up until sunrise quite a few mornings unable to stop myself from reading until the end of each. Thank you for all of the hard work you've put into each of these tales and giving me a reprieve from my own life and a new world to dive into. I'm only sad that I've found this story unfinished right at the height of its climax. I've had to look up so many new words, I've loved it. I enjoy the way you write and the way you bring the characters to life. I hope to follow you until its conclusion.

Thank you for all you've done.

Sincerely,
read-n-review v.)
It's what I was called to do, deservedly for you.

Ahh! So close to the end I can’t take it!
Loved this chapter and seeing the inmost cave framework.
I don’t know why, but Idunn gives me strong Shirley Jones vibes (I know—wrong hair, wrong everything.) Must be the mother archetype. ️

this is such a phenomenal story. you are a genius and what a gifted fantastic writer. what an imagination wow im in awe and sooo addicted!

So glad to see this updated! And what a chapter, too. Yikes, I feel like J better have some kind of plan better than the one we just heard. He'd indicated previously that "plans change." So we shall see. Off topic, Gunnarsson seems like an oddly relatable person. Out of his depths, but trying to do the right thing.

this is extremely well written, im thoroughly enjoying this so far.. i have a feeling this is going to be amazing

Nossa, que angustia!

Wow. You sure know how to leave a reader dangling on a cliff. I would literally throw myself at his feet and beg. Children are precious.

AAAAAAA!AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA SDFGHJKLZXVBNMASDGGHJKKKLLLQWRTHJJKLASDDGGJJKMAAAAASSSAAAAAAAAAAASAASAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA OH DAMN ITS GETTING SO FRICKIN GOOD IM AT THE EDGE OF MY SEAT! THE ENTIRE CHAPTER! I have read your series on and off for the past several years and I have never failed to get lost in EVERY! SINGLE! CHAPTER! Just inject your writing straight into my veins because THIS IS THE GOOD SHIT! Your writing, how you wrote, ballanced all the elements, suspense, emotions, characters, conflict, like PLEASE SHARE a little of your writing process if you want to because it felt so elaborate when reading it every single time, phenomenal chapter this story is just *chefs kiss* so good. So goo that one day if you manage to complete this beauty I would live to find someone to create a physical copy, leather-bound, maybe some illustrations like a fairy tale and place it on my shelf because it is sooooo good (if I do find myself with money in the future to pay for whatever elaborate bookbinding of your fanfic, still exists, and you are still lurking on this fanfic website Ill try to let you know about it because I want to fully credit you by your fanfic handle, maybe have your fanfic account name written in elaborate gold with the fancy pretty cursive) i have wanted for years to have some of my favorite fanfics to be bound by leather ever since I learned that was a thing soooo thats where a lot of that excitement is coming from. Thank you for the delicious read

Oh my my my, I did not expect that much to happen in one update!
I’m desperately hungry for more! Feed me Seymour! Feed me!