Reviews for Unto The Breach |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Disculpa la corrección pero los bijus son técnicamente chakra natural puro con consiencia por eso es q cuando mueren reaparecen |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful story! I hope this story can be completed somewhere in the future. Good luck author-san :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, this story is so sweet XD The very serious and strong Naruto is so cool! I can say it was definitely one of the best 'I-am-from-the-future' revelation story! Can't wait to read for more cahpter! But, of course, I have to drop this review first! |
![]() ![]() ![]() retarded |
![]() ![]() ![]() You're still here writing, but you abandoned this. Your best work. What a shame and waste of time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn right about the Peggy sue, literally discovered the word yesterday and I've been part ffn for 4yrs already. Talk about see it once, see it everywhere doesn't do justice to the amount of time i started to see the word. |
![]() ![]() ![]() And of course life gets in the way just as the story picks up |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Hokage-sama, command me," he whispered, plainly doing his level best to keep his voice steady. "Upon my honor, my life is yours, Hokage-sama," he whispered. "Upon this oath, know that I am yours to command." I don't know why, but picturing Naruto to do this, to say this, it made my heart clenched. Like... I never take him as someone who would BOW, SUBMIT to someone else. The same like my heart clenched for Yagura in any fic where he surrended to Mei. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "This is going to be a political nightmare, isn't it?" |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing, simply an amazing read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Soju is awesome the little bottle a friend shared with us tasted almost like a flat soda |
![]() ![]() ![]() can you update pls |
![]() ![]() ![]() update this pls. update or i will gamble my mouse pad |
![]() ![]() Update |
![]() ![]() Hmmm |