Reviews for Unto The Breach
Guest chapter 11 . 3/23
I really enjoyed this wish you would come back with more
Kingkong101 chapter 4 . 2/10
God this is shitty
FlawedBauthor chapter 9 . 6/10/2024
Hey, you brain dead monkey, Indefinite hiatus just means abandoned. Maybe just say that. Idiot.
Emma Rose Bodeholt chapter 11 . 4/19/2024
Please continue to story. I would love to read more.
FlawedBauthor chapter 11 . 3/10/2024
You misspelled abandoned, retard.
miss-direct836 chapter 3 . 2/26/2024
I love how the nuance of the excellent humour is literally in the details and nonverbal exchange.
miss-direct836 chapter 2 . 2/26/2024
Oh, this is such a good prank.
frankcede716 chapter 2 . 12/4/2023
Disculpa la corrección pero los bijus son técnicamente chakra natural puro con consiencia por eso es q cuando mueren reaparecen
LilinAnade chapter 11 . 10/21/2023
Wonderful story!
I hope this story can be completed somewhere in the future. Good luck author-san :)
LilinAnade chapter 4 . 10/21/2023
Aww, this story is so sweet XD
The very serious and strong Naruto is so cool! I can say it was definitely one of the best 'I-am-from-the-future' revelation story! Can't wait to read for more cahpter! But, of course, I have to drop this review first!
alsdjhfgljkwebgh chapter 4 . 11/19/2022
retarded
alsdjhfgljkwebgh chapter 11 . 10/31/2022
You're still here writing, but you abandoned this. Your best work. What a shame and waste of time.
realfan16 chapter 3 . 9/29/2022
Damn right about the Peggy sue, literally discovered the word yesterday and I've been part ffn for 4yrs already. Talk about see it once, see it everywhere doesn't do justice to the amount of time i started to see the word.
Makuro767 chapter 11 . 6/2/2022
And of course life gets in the way just as the story picks up
Ryuu24 chapter 4 . 4/20/2022
"Hokage-sama, command me," he whispered, plainly doing his level best to keep his voice steady.
"Upon my honor, my life is yours, Hokage-sama," he whispered. "Upon this oath, know that I am yours to command."

I don't know why, but picturing Naruto to do this, to say this, it made my heart clenched. Like... I never take him as someone who would BOW, SUBMIT to someone else. The same like my heart clenched for Yagura in any fic where he surrended to Mei.
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