Reviews for Unto The Breach
frankcede716 chapter 2 . 16h
Disculpa la corrección pero los bijus son técnicamente chakra natural puro con consiencia por eso es q cuando mueren reaparecen
LilinAnade chapter 11 . 10/21
Wonderful story!
I hope this story can be completed somewhere in the future. Good luck author-san :)
LilinAnade chapter 4 . 10/21
Aww, this story is so sweet XD
The very serious and strong Naruto is so cool! I can say it was definitely one of the best 'I-am-from-the-future' revelation story! Can't wait to read for more cahpter! But, of course, I have to drop this review first!
alsdjhfgljkwebgh chapter 4 . 11/19/2022
alsdjhfgljkwebgh chapter 11 . 10/31/2022
You're still here writing, but you abandoned this. Your best work. What a shame and waste of time.
realfan16 chapter 3 . 9/29/2022
Damn right about the Peggy sue, literally discovered the word yesterday and I've been part ffn for 4yrs already. Talk about see it once, see it everywhere doesn't do justice to the amount of time i started to see the word.
Makuro767 chapter 11 . 6/2/2022
And of course life gets in the way just as the story picks up
Ryuu24 chapter 4 . 4/20/2022
"Hokage-sama, command me," he whispered, plainly doing his level best to keep his voice steady.
"Upon my honor, my life is yours, Hokage-sama," he whispered. "Upon this oath, know that I am yours to command."

I don't know why, but picturing Naruto to do this, to say this, it made my heart clenched. Like... I never take him as someone who would BOW, SUBMIT to someone else. The same like my heart clenched for Yagura in any fic where he surrended to Mei.
Ryuu24 chapter 7 . 4/20/2022
"This is going to be a political nightmare, isn't it?"
Bear0927 chapter 11 . 3/25/2022
Amazing, simply an amazing read.
Runyon chapter 10 . 12/25/2021
Soju is awesome the little bottle a friend shared with us tasted almost like a flat soda
bobbitoast chapter 5 . 9/16/2021
can you update pls
bobbitoast chapter 4 . 9/16/2021
update this pls. update or i will gamble my mouse pad
Guest chapter 11 . 7/1/2021
Cauldronw chapter 11 . 2/23/2021
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