I really enjoyed this wish you would come back with more

God this is shitty

Hey, you brain dead monkey, Indefinite hiatus just means abandoned. Maybe just say that. Idiot.

Please continue to story. I would love to read more.

You misspelled abandoned, retard.

I love how the nuance of the excellent humour is literally in the details and nonverbal exchange.

Oh, this is such a good prank.

Disculpa la corrección pero los bijus son técnicamente chakra natural puro con consiencia por eso es q cuando mueren reaparecen

Wonderful story!
I hope this story can be completed somewhere in the future. Good luck author-san :)

Aww, this story is so sweet XD
The very serious and strong Naruto is so cool! I can say it was definitely one of the best 'I-am-from-the-future' revelation story! Can't wait to read for more cahpter! But, of course, I have to drop this review first!

retarded

You're still here writing, but you abandoned this. Your best work. What a shame and waste of time.

Damn right about the Peggy sue, literally discovered the word yesterday and I've been part ffn for 4yrs already. Talk about see it once, see it everywhere doesn't do justice to the amount of time i started to see the word.

And of course life gets in the way just as the story picks up

"Hokage-sama, command me," he whispered, plainly doing his level best to keep his voice steady.
"Upon my honor, my life is yours, Hokage-sama," he whispered. "Upon this oath, know that I am yours to command."

I don't know why, but picturing Naruto to do this, to say this, it made my heart clenched. Like... I never take him as someone who would BOW, SUBMIT to someone else. The same like my heart clenched for Yagura in any fic where he surrended to Mei.