Reviews for Ashikabi of Thunder and Lightning |
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drotcheslaff chapter 1 . 8/31 With all the unnecessary japanese idioms and phrases in this, I expected a good keikaku reference. Sad. |
ThunderClaw03 chapter 15 . 8/16 Not surprisingly her son get so pissed off in the next chapter. Family is extremely important to him. |
RyuuGaSaiko chapter 29 . 5/30 Thanks for the chapter. But why you made Haruka dumber in the first place? |
Jack Inqu chapter 29 . 5/29 Well, the plan is in place; let's see how well it goes. Take care, good luck, stay safe, stay healthy, and I look forward to your next update. |
Jack Inqu chapter 28 . 5/29 Very interesting plot development. |
Jake the Snake chapter 29 . 5/24 Looking forward to see if the plan works. |
Hero100100 chapter 1 . 5/24 Don't know if you'll be getting that so I put it in the PM as well. I just finished chapter 29 of Ashikabi of Thunder and Lightning another great chapter. Yukari starting to show her hybrid form and not even know it I wonder if their mother actually knows about this or not. I'm also hoping that there's more than just one hybrid maybe even bring back Hidaka Chiho I don't remember if you killed off or sent her away but either way technically you can bring her back and make her into a hybrid and have Nuibari at a weapon considering that the is really good at sewing. Nuibari (縫い針, literally meaning: Sewing Needle): A sword in the shape of a needle with a long thin wire that resembles thread attached to it, which can be used to pierce enemies and "sew" them together in human bundles. And there is a lot of different types of machines that could be made nowadays like the actual Gundam that not actually made for combat technically although it technically could be modified quite easily for it to be as well as apparently the Iron Man Armor that apparently has actually been made not for combat but apparently someone did make a actual armor that actually can fly in everything and withstand quite a bit of damage and had a proper power source just no real weapons although people have made types of lasers that could be used as Iron Man weapons and apparently people have made the Spider-Man web shooters which means that technically we could have the Iron Spider eventually in the real World. And that actually means that Matsu could in fact create these in the story and I'm hoping that that is what she's building in this chapter is one of them I'm also kind of hoping that Kusano get a Batman's utility belt with different seeds in it that would be so awesome. |
Guest chapter 29 . 5/22 So tsukiumi, kazehana, and benitsuba are gonna be winged. Yume will be revived. And homura is a big maybe. So that's another 5 sekirei he can get to his flock, glad he will have such power to destroy his enemies with. |
Guest chapter 29 . 5/22 Disclaimer: I do not own Sekirei. More's the pity, now that it's out in paperback. What does that even mean? |
Jam-Man265 chapter 29 . 5/24 There needs to be an Escape from New York reference in the next chapter~! |
Leaf Ranger chapter 29 . 5/24 Well, here's hoping that the plan won't suffer any major failure's or problems. Guess we'll see, won't we? Keep up the excellent work. |
WindbornesWord chapter 29 . 5/23 Great chapter, kind of want Shigi to just realize that he can’t fucking leave though. He’s a goddamn idiot to be insisting on leaving. If they get picked up by any other government he might as well kill Kuno now. And they will be picked up. At least she won’t die and they can be reunited at the end of the plan by Kusano if they stayed. Also Seer have you considered backing up every story you’ve got completely on AO3? seems to be dying a slow death with how they won’t fix email notifications at all. Plus you’ll have the complete versions of everything with the Lemons, not just a chapter here or there. |
TheEmeraldMage chapter 29 . 5/23 Aside from Yukari most likely believe me that her boobs are getting bigger everything else was just the overall planning of the big event that's gonna involve what happened in cannon with the big escape. Not really much for me to comment on other than the fact that things seem to be running smoothly with the whole planning process on everyone's end though let's hope that a certain someone, since he got hit with the super super super virus won't screw it up somehow. Still a decent set up chapter and can't wait to see the plan pop off! As always, stay healthy and safe! |
Tsuki-no-Hazama Hime chapter 29 . 5/23 FINALLY AFTER GRUELLING DAYS AND SOME DISTURBED FREE DAYS! YOU GRANT ME SOME UPDATE! THANK YOU SO MUCH! I LOVE THE CHAPTER AND will wait for more... I am a good girl after all, I will not demand. |
Yami no Ninaite chapter 29 . 5/23 Why are they still planning on a breakout? After most everyone talked about how all leaving the area does is grants foreign powers your head on a platter for visisection, why help them leave? |