| Reviews for Ashikabi of Thunder and Lightning |
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   Terumi Gremory chapter 1 . 1/15/2015 Well a very interesting start I have to say alright especially you start out Minato with Hikari and Hibiki now that is very interesting indeed I look forward to where this story goes. |
| Velzon chapter 1 . 1/15/2015 Oooo another new story! It's like Christmas! Not only did you update all the storys I enjoy but many new stories! I've always liked the Sekirei fan fiction since most of the time it gives us new options on it and I agree with another reviewer I would like if Yashima (The one with a hammer) Ends up with Minato even him saving her from the arse that her Ashikabi in Cannon is. Finally you have options of making your own Sekirei or using ones from the ps2 game like Yahan who is awesome looking in my option as either a companion or enemy. But I digress I look forward to reading a new story from you. Good job on the first chapter |
| Reishin Amara chapter 1 . 1/15/2015 oh man oh man..i cant wait to see how things turn out in this case...also...kinda hope they pass the gravity hammer girl on the way..her ashikabi was an abusive ass...so if they see him being like ...THAT...well...maybe they can kick his ass and then explain to her how you can react to more than one person...Heck,maybe Minato will run in Akitsu at the hospital? |
| KingPlotBunny chapter 1 . 1/15/2015 nice although I can understand why takami would want to keep minato out of the sekirei plan after all minato isn't that confident and the bond between an ashikabi and sekirei is very deep and intimate, forced winging excluded, so if a sekirei is terminated the ashikabi would be close to if not fully in emotional distress so it makes sense as a mother she wouldn't want her son to go through anything like that on the other hand though since minaka and takami are both ashikabi and minato is going to college in the same city as the sekirei plan keeping him out wouldn't be possible even if minaka never interfered I do you warn you try not to bash seo after all takahito was his best friend so it would make sense he would fight mbi and go against minaka , though what sane person wouldn't, also try not to turn minato into some instant gary stu I don't think you will based on how you described him but still just felt it needed to be said a lot of authors write good sekirei stories only to ruin them by making minato into some instant badass with no explanation or adding a military record which doesn't make sense anyway this looks like a good story I definitely will be looking forward to more |
| marlastiano chapter 1 . 1/15/2015 Thanks :) |