Reviews for Ashikabi of Thunder and Lightning |
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daniel2610994 chapter 24 . 6/3/2021 Lol it's nice that you chose to aknowledge how every single country will do anything to get their hands on the Sekirei. |
L chapter 18 . 5/31/2021 Surprised they stopped at kissing and a little groping given the loopholes Matsu mentioned. Also surprised his sister is still there considering his sekirei were trying to send her to the inn on the first day,and that she was able to hold out this long |
D chapter 17 . 5/31/2021 Honestly surprised none of his sekirei used the loopholes Matsu referenced. |
dkainallen chapter 17 . 6/1/2021 shame that they'll be no incest it's a shame for incest is wincest |
Jakeros chapter 24 . 6/1/2021 I've deduced that there are two main characters in this fic: Minato, and Takami, with the latter being a bit more prominent in terms of plot development. Not that i'm complaining of course. Getting to see her being featured more is very nice to see, and her being able to act like a mom even more so. I wish Tsukiumi would take the stage again, or hell even Kazehana - but with what's about to happen, that might be soon - but I'm content to wait. Now I have two...three actually, stories to wait on instead of just one. And all of them are well worth it. Hell, every one of your stories are worth it. I'm going to have to get into several series I haven't even touched just to read them all! But until then, Write on! |
Jakeros chapter 22 . 6/1/2021 First sekirei, bedded. Only 12 more to go...and then some :3 |
Jakeros chapter 21 . 6/1/2021 And here I thought you sent Tsukiumi away like Tam Rocket. At least she came back, if only briefly. |
Jakeros chapter 20 . 6/1/2021 Tsukiumi belongs with Minato, and that's all I'm gonna say. At least Seo turned out to be less of a douche here. I really like the guy tbh. He may be...well, trash, but he's not an asshole. |
Jakeros chapter 19 . 6/1/2021 o_o Please, please, don't let this be the last of her little jealousy! That section was...ahem...very satisfying. |
Jakeros chapter 18 . 6/1/2021 ...O_O Well, looks like that idiot isn't so much of an idiot after all. I mean he is still one, but he's a competent idiot when given the right incentive. Trying to mess with his plan, on top of trying to ransom his ex - the woman he still feels something for? Bad move America. And really, it can't be anything other than them. Who else has a "ridiculous house"? |
Jakeros chapter 17 . 6/1/2021 Out of all of this, all I can do is laugh at how freaking prepared Minaka is. Get kicked off a skyscraper? Parachute/glider installation. Get falcon-fisted through a wall by an irate sekirei? Crash helmet and fake wall are a must. The guy's insane, but he's a genius when it comes self-preservation. |
Jakeros chapter 14 . 6/1/2021 Well that was...unexpected. And it's good to see someone like Oriha being set for proper use instead of a random extra attack dog. Wasted potential. |
Jakeros chapter 11 . 6/1/2021 I'm no fool as to why Karasuba broke his arm; one wad for attempting to, indirectly, kill Musubi - the other being that, in some way, she has come to think of Minato with something akin to respect. All valid and appropriate reasons for why that bastard should lose a limb. |
Jakeros chapter 10 . 6/1/2021 Oh how damn satisfying it is to see that arrogant, fish-eyed bastard taken down a peg or two. |
Jack Inqu chapter 24 . 6/1/2021 Always nice to see someone get the verbal upper hand over Miya. Sounds like they have a good plan in mind; we'll see how it plays out. Take care, good luck, stay safe, stay healthy, and I look forward to your next update. |