Reviews for Ashikabi of Thunder and Lightning
HectorFenyx chapter 23 . 4/11/2021
Me encantó por favor continua este fic.
ReadersCantRead chapter 1 . 2/15/2021
Cry a lil when some of the five year fics have 200-300k and this champion of its fandom only has 100k. The slow downs make it seem like we'll be waiting a few more years to see it reach that point as well. Saaaaaad.
MacMan3679 chapter 23 . 1/30/2021
I expect a new chapter as soon as possible, no more unfinished stories, please.
A.R.C chapter 23 . 1/6/2021
Please update soon, it is one of the most interesting I read.
A chapter 23 . 12/19/2020
I hope you continue, awesome story!
deuspandamaligno chapter 23 . 12/20/2020
I would also like to know if miya, karasuba and other unknown sekirei joined minato
deuspandamaligno chapter 1 . 12/20/2020
great story I wait for the next chapter, I enter the site daily to see if the story has already been updated
Clayton Williams chapter 23 . 12/11/2020
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Tyrant Overlord Killidia chapter 23 . 11/11/2020
Just so that I could be sure, I went to Chapter 4 and looked at the list for Minato's flock and saw that Yume's name was not on there. Something is telling me that either Musubi is going to be defeated so that Yume can reinvigorate her and merge with her or there will be a sequel to this where Yume joins Minato's flock.
TherapyKitten chapter 23 . 10/29/2020
Can't wait for the next chapter! love this story
pavook chapter 23 . 10/26/2020
Why do they still want to escape? They could stay shielded by Minato or n.01. I doubt anyone would want to open war on these two. I know the original event, but that doesn't mean that it can't be changed. Sorry to say, but there are others that would rather be elsewhere with their sekiries, but had the unfortunate to be coerced, which is what happened to the 2 they fight recently.
pavook chapter 10 . 10/21/2020
Minato is weak. They were after his LIFE and he let the Sekirei walk away. It improved nothing at all. He should be weakening the enemy because he would not back down if he was already committed to breaking every rule, even the human ones. I agree with Bearmauls. He let it go once, which was okay, it didn't directly involve him with unwinged Sekirei, but sending assassins to you, that's past levels of forgiving attitude.

Matsu could cripple his company for goddamit. Not just shut down servers, but exploit his money away, point the police to anything that isn't legal, leak information about it to the outside competitors, and generally make hell. She is practically a hacker prodigy... That's right, PikaMew1288, pretty much what I thought about it.
pavook chapter 6 . 10/21/2020
Spare rooms? One dedicated computer room? Am I missing something, how big is the house? I remember in one of the previous chapters that it was supposed to be a 3 bedroom house with a living room, kitchen, and 2 sets of bathrooms. A possible explanation is that it was information about only one floor of the house and did not count the upper floor and basement. That would make quite a bit more rooms, but then it's the size of a villa or something with 10 or so rooms in total, perhaps more, depending on how the basement is designed and if the house has an attic.
Xerzo LotCN chapter 23 . 10/16/2020
interesting but soon miya and fem homura
(just need his mom to say ... yea you were born female but your adjuster made you gender fluid as an experiment authorization by the idiot
it's fine being a tomboy so you semi defaulted as male being bi as most seikrei are but it was more to suit their fetish though ... or something like that would be funny)

poor forced and conscripted so why did they fight to disable not knock out and help?
also when is the raid on the other territories to put them down and safe the victims lol

well this arc is starting but better then normal
pendragonZx chapter 23 . 10/14/2020
The Yukari plot line is getting old either have her come to terms with her feelings and move, on or go somewhere with it. It’s the only part of the story that’s stupid. She loves her brother but won’t accept her feelings? Okay that’s fine but giving her Sekirei makes the whole plot line pointless. Unless she is to choose her Sekirei over Minato in which case do so and move on. She is either part of the main cast or a side character. If she’s a side character send her to Miya’s and get her out of the way.
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