Reviews for Ashikabi of Thunder and Lightning |
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Tsuki-no-Hazama Hime chapter 29 . 5/22 FINALLY AFTER GRUELLING DAYS AND SOME DISTURBED FREE DAYS! YOU GRANT ME SOME UPDATE! THANK YOU SO MUCH! I LOVE THE CHAPTER AND will wait for more... I am a good girl after all, I will not demand. |
dawnwatch chapter 29 . 5/22 Well this is going to interesting. |
Yami no Ninaite chapter 17 . 5/22 What happened to Yukari x Minato? You've been building that up for sixteen chapters. |
evilstatistic19 chapter 29 . 5/22 Good chapter. I'm looking forward to the next one. |
codywhite162 chapter 29 . 5/22 Excellent chapter! Looking forward to the next update. |
UnseenUrge chapter 29 . 5/22 thank you author for updating the stoy the bew chapter was great |
Warrior of the Forbidden Flame chapter 29 . 5/22 What about the Sekirei trackers inside Kuno... MBI is able to track a deactivate sekirei to their exact location... that mean some sort of nanobots inside them acting like a locator beacon |
Ariadne Venegas chapter 29 . 5/22 I still think that help him escape was stupid in canon and in every other fanfic. He has a MBI card that will explode when he try to use it outside so he will die. Or they will die when some agency find them and get to experiment on them or MBI recapture Kuno and kill him. There is no way in hell that the escape has a happy ending. That here Takami is helping is bad, because she is endorsing that they will be captured or be experimented with and that is against what they were trying to do. So I don’t understand why every author keeps this? Apart from my rant, I really love your fic and Minato even if he is thinking of the implications of the future even the imminent one outside of the city. His plan to get them out is really good. Also I love that he cook for his girls. |
Major Simi chapter 29 . 5/22 Wwll seems like they have their work cut for them. Anyway great chapter and keep going |
AdrianVnz chapter 29 . 5/22 Mmmmm i wonder if that device is for blocking MBI's systems or maybe to fake Shigi and Kuno's death? Anyway something so they can be tracked after they leave. And can't wait until the part where chaos ensues, no plan survives contact with the enemy, and i just know Minato will get at least 1 more Sekirei after this. Wether its Kazehana, Tsukiumi or Benitsubasa its the question...or all 3, i can hope xD |
ethan.lukkar chapter 29 . 5/22 magnificent chapter can't wait for more please update soon |
marlastiano chapter 29 . 5/22 :) |
CamareroChris chapter 29 . 5/22 thanks for the chapter |
Zarroc789 chapter 29 . 5/22 I'm happy to see this updated. This and your DxD story are my favorites |
Fin chapter 28 . 5/17 I was a good reader and I waited...but dang your schedule is not kept often I hope this time it is. Campione and then this story is next finally with some progress I hope to see at least 3 chapters because is be push to the side alot. |