Nice chapter, good work.

Great Chapter!
Keep Up The Good Work!
Thanks For The Meal.
Till Next Time!
Stay Safe.

Reality Ensues:
Trying to force one's more traditional beliefs when it comes to intercourse on individuals who have looser regard to them will only cause backlash and resentment even if the latter respects the former.

(Eh, whoops... I forgot that this was meant for Miya, rather than Tsukiumi. Eh, whatevs! It works for both of them, anyway...)

Now that you've written your "Echoing Light Lemon" (for No. 11/Hikari and No. 12/Hibiki) on AO3... I don't suppose you have one planned for AKITSU (and the others, of course) somewhere 'down the road'?

No. 7/Akitsu has the following tropes that apply to her:
- Absolute Cleavage (And it seemed to get LARGER with the progression of the series...)
- Chained by Fashion (She wears a chain around her neck and uses it to hold her kimono shut. It shatters just prior to her finally being emerged.)
- Ethereal White Dress (She evokes the classic image of a Japanese ghost, clad in a white kimono and surrounded by a supernatural chill.)
- Going Commando (It's usually only because she forgets to wear panties, not necessarily by choice...)
- Impossibly-Low Neckline: (BARELY held closed by her obi and chains.)
- Sugar-and-Ice Personality (Beneath her cool exterior, she's actually kind and gentle. These glimpses primarily show when interacting with her companions.)

And after all that she's been through, whether in canon or fanon, I think she'll be WAY overdue for some... 'alone time' with her Ashikabi~. Maybe she can get the... 'full-course dinner', if you know what I mean? ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡)

I still can't see how Tsukiumi tends to perform very well in popularity contests among fans of the "Sekirei" series ('Ensemble Dark Horse'). Maybe it's my personal bias against any 'tsundere' (especially when it's 'deconstructed'), but... 'Clingy Jealous Girl'? 'Hair-Trigger Temper'? 'Self-Proclaimed Love Interest'? (And, of course, 'Tsundere'?) With tropes like those associated with No. 9/Tsukiumi, I call it a miracle that Minato's still alive in canon! (Granted, I suppose she has a 'Freudian Excuse'... but still!)

Given Tsukiumi's prideful nature and her tendency to proclaim herself as 'Minato's legal wife' in canon... you think it'll be hilarious in a meta-way that, for all her prejudice against 'monkeys', she ends up as a/the 'Butt-Monkey' for this story (regardless on whether she is Winged by Minato, as per canon)? Like a sort of 'Laser-Guided Karma/Poetic Justice'?

Oh, and I stumbled upon this tidbit from this story's "TV Tropes" page, under 'Reality Ensues':
[Trying to force one's more traditional beliefs when it comes to intercourse on individuals who have looser regard to them will only cause backlash and resentment even if the latter respects the former.]
THANK YOU! (ง ͠ ͟ل͜ ͡)ง

[Throughout the rest of the house at the same time, the rest of Minato's Sekirei settled down from their rather racy dreams and back into sleep, although more than a few would be deeply embarrassed by the state of the sheets caused by the nature of their dreams.]
Given that the flock are all 'Mindlink Mates'... good luck with clean-up duty, Minato! Can't wait to see the look on their faces in the morning!

I like the amount of character you put into Minaka. Sure, he's a madman who created a death game with innocent aliens cause he wanted to, but he still has standards.

finally! uh I can't find the story on Ao3, is it haven't finished yet? or deleted too?

Thank you for finally updating. Love this chapter. Looking forward to the next chapters

Lol yeah Tsukiumi really stepped into it when she decided to talk down to Kazehana as wonderful as Tsukiumi maybe she definitely has some rough edges to her personality she needs to smooth out. Though the sound entirely her fault that her Handler had issues not that she was wrong anyway because a lot of Sekirei have been unfortunate enough to run into the kind of Ashikabi that Tsukiumi fears. Though Tsukiumi isn't stupid so she should be all right even in her on winged state and with that stupid limiter on her powers she is still powerful and her water Elemental abilities make it difficult to fight against her even for multiple opponents so they would not have an easy time taking her down. But she will come around eventually, the pull will only get stronger.

Well Minaka is crazy and delusional but not stupid at least not when it comes to most things it seems so it's not surprising that he understands the situation very well. I still wish Takami would just push him off that building though without a jetpack or parachute or any other safety net that he might have.

Minato's feeling a bit insecure is understandable after all he has 11 Sekirei with more to come who are all Super Human League beautiful and amazing not unreasonable that he would feel that he he isn't good enough for them no I'm glad that his confidence issues are being taken care of and he's definitely becoming more confident and is truly starting to live up to the potential that he has. And I'm not going to lie I really do hope he takes over his father's company and use it to ensure the protection of the Sekirei and their Ashikabis and families.

And so Minato has finally been able to make sweet love to Hikari and Hibiki. No I won't lie I am honestly surprised you was able to satisfy them with their super stamina and and I suppose they will have to be a schedule for the love of Macon with two a night because I don't see how else you'd have any chance of satisfying them they all have super stamina and at the end of the day he's only human doesn't matter if you was in exceptional human physical condition. But I suppose he will have plenty of practice to increase his stamina to as high as it can be lol.

Anyway amazing, I love the chapter and I look forward to your next one.

Could not find on ao3

I want to say that, as always, this is a really good chapter. Buuuuut... the lemon is nowhere to be found in AO3. I even have your AO3 profile Bookmarked for ease of access, and I still didn't find it.

I looked up the chapter/one shot lemon on ao3 but it's not there. I love this chapter either way.

glad Hikari and Hibiki finally slept with Minato

Poor other girls!

Minato need to build stamina in general, his sekireis will need to make him exercise ! So he feel more secure in himself as manly, have more stamina for the battles to come and can perform for more time In bed!

Comical fact: my elder is the exact age of Minato and he is as timid as the canon one. I’m not Takami, but he has problems socializing and he is so cute. I think if there was a sekirei plan sekireis will flow to him as with Minato.

I’m not that old if you want to know I was in uni and all my exams was in interview with public it went so bad and I was so sad and shocked as how my
Mark went from good from the year to you wont pass. That I forgot my pill! There my now clearly not so little ronin in the pandemia. (Yeah he fail his exam so fortunately he is not in uni this year) also if you are worried I lived with my boyfriend and we married when my son was almost a year, to be sure we were marrying because us and not him only.

couldn't find it on a03

Mmm mmm mmm mmmmh….

What's next? Kazehana, Homura, and Tsukiumi, plus about seven others (Kaho, Benitsubasa, and Haihane among them) are due to be Winged.