Dang Sakura has no shame. Should've break her bones.

That was exactly how I feel about Sakura in canon. My dislike went I don't understand why there's people who can say it's not a big deal, while this arc is the most emotional for me after Jiraiya's Death and pictured Naruto mental's state very clearly.

Huh, pretty Sus that she didn't mention being stabbed or hit anywhere else, wasn't she pressing/cradling her stomach a lot after she got attacked? Maybe I'm wrong xD
Gonna keep on reading

Shikamaru and (fem)NarutoCuddling in their sleep*

ShikakuVisible disgust*

Audience: LET ME AT 'EM! LET ME AT 'EM! LET! ME! AT! 'EM!

Shikaku: Why are you wearing shoes in bed, dumbass?!

Welp, after 42 chapters I think I have to say a bit (not really that long of a review since I'm not good at them xD).

1st, it doesn't bother me that much that there are some few minor errors in spelling, it happens, and since I'm not a native English speaker, I'm even leds bothered by it xD

2nd, I feel like you're setting up even more drama for the Shikamaru x Naruko Ship, like, yeah, i get the whole Jiraiya x Tsunade thing of never taking that step onto a Relationship, I'm just gonna go ahead and say that (since there's a lot of foreshadowing) when the villagers went into Naruto's room, they hurt her so badly that she's not going to be able to have kids

3rd Mrs. Huruma is a pretty hateable Character, and she doesn't even appear that much, good job xD.
Konohamaru as a protective little brother is always wholesome

not gonna lie, been following this story for forever, and I shrieked at the start of this chapter with the possible chance of children, and then wept at the proposal! I'm so happy to read this story, thank you for such a wonderful story! can't wait for what comes next!

So beautiful!

Man this is gay argument is pure gold!

Illiteracy could very well be a very valid reason for naruto's abysmal academy scores
But it's not canon compliant, because naruto was easily able to read through his chunin exam question paper
But still, it's a good deduction that you worked out

Absolutely incredible! So cute!

I finished reading all the chapters of your store a few weeks back. it's such a good story! I love the way you've written Shikamaru and Naruto's relationship.

I can't stop thinking about your story. Keep up the great work!

just checking in, i haven't read this in a while but it is definitely one of my favorite stories on here.

I've read fics where sakura is a unlikable bitch but holy fuck

To be honest I honestly have no words this story has been with me through tough times, got me through anxiety attacks and more. When I first found the story I didn’t think they were changed my life this much nor did I think that I would love it this much. I just wanna thank you for continuing to write this story and I hope that it stays on here forever. Ugh I’m a big crying mess now I’m gonna go bye bye. (:

DO NOT change anything about this story I like it the way it is, so please don't