|Reviews for All Started With A Smell|
| Guest chapter 65 . 5h
Best. Read. Ever! Can't wait for the next chapter as I've spent the last two days reading them.
| draculyn28 chapter 65 . 9/20
Very good chapter, I hope the continuation, greetings.
| little bit chapter 64 . 9/19
Breathe is spelt wrong. To breathe is the action of respiration, the verb. The breath is the air, the item, the noun. Take the time to note the differences in meaning and use between breath, breathe, breathes, breathed and breathing. Because they are all used differently and using the wrong one can have a negative impact on what you're trying to get across. In my case it caused me to laugh and therefore not be in the right emotional and mental wavelength to take the rest of your message seriously. In some cases spelling and grammar mistakes can make people dismissive. Simply discarding what you have to say because of how it is presented.
Thanks for sharing.
| ObscureAbsurdity chapter 28 . 9/18
HALLELUJAH! THERE IS RIGHT IN THE WORLD!
lol sorry but all the suspense has been killing me, I honestly couldn't tell what was going to happen.
| AnimeLover978 chapter 1 . 9/12
Ok I legitimately just read the first line and I’m already hooked lmao...
I can’t express in words how it generally describes my life ...
And that because I don’t ever write reviews...
I can count on one hand the amount of
times I’ve reviewed on this site
So Kudos to you Author
| ReaperOfOaths chapter 15 . 9/11
You fucking idiot shikamaru you had one fucking job and that's check Naruto's gender. I can't tell if I'm reading yaoi or not God damn it.
| Stolyint chapter 65 . 9/11
Love that you updated. As always, you did a great job with the chapter. Really liked the parts that you decided to do for Naruto's POV. I honestly don't know what to say except that I will be eagerly waiting read the rest of this story.
| dancibayo chapter 65 . 9/10
gah poor naruto. hopefully shikamaru will be able to assure her that hes never leaving.
| Mashrose chapter 14 . 9/8
THIS IS SOOOOOO CUTE! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
| Mashrose chapter 9 . 9/8
Ahhhhhh! I want to see their reaction to Naruto beating Neji!
| Mashrose chapter 9 . 9/8
I feel bad now I read this author's note. Please know I wasn't trying to be mean, I was just trying to help, because I've seen a lot of others, like my friend who I think only gets it wrong now on purpose to annoy me, get them confused as well.
| Mashrose chapter 8 . 9/8
Shikamaru's dad's name is Shikaku. Not Shukaku. That's why they both have the nickname Shika. It's also why the Ino-Shika-Cho formation has over twenty generations. Ino's dad is Inoichi, and Choji's dad is Chouza.
| The Solitary Tempest chapter 65 . 9/8
Like the chapter~
| rere97maui chapter 65 . 9/8
When I saw the update I decided to re-read the entire story and I fell in love with it all over again. You write a compelling story and I can’t wait for the next chapter!
| myafroatemydog chapter 63 . 9/8
This was a good chapter.