Reviews for All Started With A Smell |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I have spent the last three days binging this In all the spare time I had, even stayed up most of one night! I really really loved this story! I hope to one day write flirting as well as you have the flow of conversations in this story is one of my favourite things about it. Thank you for your commitment to finish it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nvm i found my answer, appreciate you |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uhhh homie imma be honest i was assuming you were a dude. You gay? Or a girl? Idc either way tbh |
![]() ![]() ![]() read it for the 4th time. still love it. The paring get's written too litte. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Best story I’ve ever read on this site in terms of romance. Always strayed away from romance and leaned toward action fics, but this one really got me interested in other romance stories! Again, amazing story and good luck with your 2 kids! |
![]() ![]() ![]() the shika in this story dumber than the canon. he should have been able to connect a lot of dots by now |
![]() ![]() ![]() I had never considered this pairing but hell if this story hasn't permanently etched it into my skull. 10/10, I'm gonna reread this every year or two I just know it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Based on the clues I think Naruto in this fic is female The skies themselves as a male do to the fact she was attacked for getting male attention as a kid, but don't really care if Naruto is male or female in this one it is a pretty interesting story so far. I also think the way Naruto acts around Sakura could be explained better if norther was female rather than male that is hiding their true gender. This cuz with bindings and being seemingly attracted to females could make males not as interested. In short Naruto has a mask and Sakura is part of it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I read this all in one go, and when I was on the last chapter I would stop reading because I honestly didn’t want this to end, I took so long to star this fic but once I started I couldn’t stop, it was so good to see not only your writing evolution but also what you’re accomplishing in your life, and I think this all makes it one of the best fics I have ever read (english is not my first language sorry if it is confusing) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Genderbending Naruto is one of the worst things about this fandom. I hate genderbending. It adds nothing of value to the story. |
![]() ![]() I loved every second of reading this, did it all in a day and I loved every moment. Thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() In a previous chapter, in your Author Notes, you said that all characters other than Shikamaru would think of Naruto as a boy. But wouldn't Kiba- whose nose is way stronger than Shikamaru's- and even the rest of the Inuzuka Clan know if Naruto is a girl or a boy with just one sniff too? Wouldn't the thought of asking Kiba what Kiba thought on the matter cross Shikamaru's mind? The story is written really well so far, btw. I'm enjoying it xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() You did a damn good job writing so much and being dyslexic, don’t worry about them |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is possibly one of the greatest stories on here that I’ve ever read, and to top it off it’s COMPLETED, yeah there’s a few spelling mistakes, but I think the pros outweigh the cons in this situation, thank you for this masterpiece and whatever you do for the future! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I adore this story so much! There was such a wonderful amount of detail to explain the differences their relationship made to the sequence of events without it seeming like it was nearly word-for-word canon. I liked how you made Sasuke closer to Naruto and made his character more relatable/likable. The backstory that you gave with the Children of Iron also gave the story a unique and interesting feel to it. Although the situation in of itself was horrendous, your writing was wonderful and kept me fully engaged, wondering what had happened and what would happen next. The final chapter really brought everything together and gave a wonderful sense of closure (though I was still sad to see it end). This is easily in my top 10 favorite fanfics! :D |