Reviews for Coexistence
twinkletoes66 chapter 1 . 10/5
i just couldn't put it down. it kept me on my toes the whole time and on the edge of my seat as things where getting more and more intense. i think i nearly cried at the end when everything started to come back sorta full-circle. if i could go back and read it for the first time i would do it again and again. it was just such an engaging read considering it isn't something that i would usually read.
Wicked Kisses chapter 27 . 11/4/2023
Absolutely fascinating story. I had a very hard time putting it down. Kudos, and cookies!
Jessica Capasso chapter 27 . 8/7/2023
Okay, I almost completely skipped over this story when I saw that it was a Harry in the Marauder's time story because I /hate/ those with a passion. I'm glad that I didn't this time though. It was brilliant. I do kinda wish that everyone had found out the truth about Harry at some point, just to see the faces of the jerks get rubbed in it, but I can see why you went the way you did. It did have a bit of poignance just letting his real identity fade away given the theme of the story and how he felt about it. I'm very glad that Remus finally learned the truth though. And that they got to meet back up again.
Guest chapter 27 . 1/2/2023
Overall this is a very interesting article, amazing settings and plot, good writing. But there are also some regrets. First, Dumbledore has been made to be unbearably paranoid, which I can not accept. Second, it was so sad that Ron and Hermione, as Harry's closest friends, couldn't see him. Third, Harry was supposed to be the one who wanted to know his parents, but he spent more time talking to Peter ,Snape and others that it was hard for me to is clearly Harry should be colser to his parients. In the end, I think Harry's obsession with keeping his last name a secret has done more harm than good.
Lady Rosalune chapter 27 . 12/22/2022
This was so cute. Such a unique take on the time travel cliche too. Very well done.
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 27 . 6/26/2022
So he’s not named Harry James Potter?
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 17 . 6/26/2022
Petunia is at Hogwarts?
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 10 . 6/26/2022
How did Thomas die?!
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 9 . 6/26/2022
Thomas is taking this relatively well. I hope Harry tells people his surname. He gets to know his grandparents!
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 3 . 6/26/2022
How is he in his own body but also still in James mind?
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 2 . 6/26/2022
James and Lily never dated until I think Sixth Year. So Harry isn’t in his own body, he’s in James. I hope je get his own body. Love that Snape owes him a wizarding debt.
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 1 . 6/25/2022
Uh, did Harry really die? I loved seeing Snape’s internal dialogue.
EdTheBeast chapter 27 . 6/2/2022
OK. I liked and disliked this story. It was more the back and forth and difference from canon/fanon, but obviously an AU. His changing the universe of a different universe was intriguing. After all, the story said Lily was his girlfriend of three years, when in canon it was just the last year, so an obvious alternate universe.
ForgottenShadowriter chapter 27 . 2/28/2022
Almost didn't read because of some upset reviews on this story, but I'm glad I did. It kept my interest well enough for me to binge. And while I wasn't completely happy with that ending, I think I can be content with it. Good job.
Steve-Arkarian chapter 27 . 2/4/2022
Fantastic story!

A few leftover questions though:
Did petunia ever have kids? Did Lily ever stop being such a bitch about Harry? Did the rest of them ever find out that Harry was Harry Potter? Will there be a side story with what Remus was up to? I know he would have had to travel out of the castle, or could have had her come there, but why didn't Harry travel through Molly?
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