Reviews for Coexistence
Lunaliceazreal chapter 1 . 7/28
bleubirdsong chapter 27 . 5/17
This was an eccentric story that stated with a death and really could only have ended bittersweet, but I loved it anyway. The way that in the end, Remus and Harry finally find each other... You made me cry here because everyone is so damn real and the idea that Harry had a chance to fix things is just too dear.
Talix chapter 27 . 4/10
I've read this story a few times over the years, and I was so thrilled to find out you had finished it this time! Thank you very much, it is one of my all time favorites of the hundreds I have read, with fantastic characterization and a very original plot. Great work! I can only hope to see more Harry Potter from you in the future someday. :-)
EvilMagician chapter 1 . 3/11
Before you read any further... slash... thank you thank you thank you.

Looks like a very successful book but I can't stand reading that crap, it's just gross.

Thank you again, I would have hated reading a few chapters or more and then discover it.
Mari Wollsch chapter 27 . 2/24
great xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Ratione chapter 27 . 2/18
This was an AMAZING story. Admittedly rather original and unorthodox with an unexpected ending, and perhaps a bit confusing at certain points (alternate timelines, possessing someone and sharing a mind but not sharing all thoughts...) but still amazing. Thank you for dedicating so much time and posting it here for all of us to enjoy. I truly do appreciate all the effort and love put into this story.
Death Please chapter 27 . 1/18
Will you put up a sequel?
Death Please chapter 17 . 1/18
You can't read with your eyes close.
The nerves are blocked by your eyelids, so it is factually impossible. Well at this time on earth..
We can imagine it though, seeing as its like at the top of every page of fanfiction, EVER!
Katsy111 chapter 27 . 1/15
Oh gosh yesterday I JUST remembered this story and how good it was and out of curiosity searched for it after yeeears. And found it finished yay! I'm so glad you did, I immediately started reading it again.
It was fun, I remembered the concept was interesting, but none of the details, I didn't even know how you'd be able to come up with a reasonable conclusion - he got back to histtime? He stayed coexisting with one person? Find his own body? I'm glad you worked it out and it was brilliant! Definitely not expected AND it made sense.
This is the first story I LIKE Peter. And I liked your characterization of Snape. And everyone. I did think Harry would bond more with his parents, but it's fine that you didn't go there much, he did bond more with his grandfather, etc.
I'm happy he found Remus. I ALMOST want to kill you that we don't know his "long story" of where he was but it was great. I thought he was right that Harry's surname didn't have to be such a big deal. Since they wouldn't interact with him as the boy who lived (maybe just as James' son).
By the way I didn't find it too slashy. Just a hint. I mean I expected loads more with the warning, but I was fine either way.
Anyway thanks for finishing this, it was a real treat. You must have felt proud (and relieved?!) to finish it. Feel free to PM me if you want.
Any HP fanfic recommendations?
Guest chapter 27 . 12/14/2014
No! How can it be the end! Do they realise that the baby was Harry? What happens to Remus and Harry? Do they stay that way for all eternity? What about Snape? Omigosh what happens?
Ember Cecilia chapter 27 . 11/23/2014
Words cannot express the joy and pain I feel at seeing the end of this story, but I will do my best. Joy that I got to read this wonderful, beautiful, powerful story long as I did. And oh, what a story it is. Pain because there isn't a continuation of this story. I think that it is for the best that there isn't one, though. Mostly because of the fact that you very high bar in terms of quality, and writing anything lower than that as a continuation would not do this story justice.

After reading to the end of this story, the only criticism I have is that the story lacks a clearly defined point A to point B plot. Even that is more a matter of personal preference than anything else, because this story doesn't really need it to be truly great.

from the bottom of my heart, thank you for creating this story, sharing it with us for all to read, and devoting the time and attention and dedication you have to making sure that this story did notand when you simply ran out of creative energies for the story for more than a month.I wish it were the same way for all the stories I read, but unfortunately it is not.

With profound thanks, and deepest regrets that I must, I bid you adieu.


Ember Cecilia
Ember Cecilia chapter 16 . 11/22/2014
I feel that I must nod my head to your masterful sense of witticism, irony, and humor, particularly given the way you referenced "42" in this chapter.

I would like to thank you for your creation of this story. The quality of writing in this story is leagues above most of the rest of this site, and-at least in my opinion-good enough to be published. I look forward to reading the rest of the story, and I will be sad to see its end. I have only a few constructive criticisms for the story, but seeing as they are plot related, I will hold them until I am completely finished reading this story.


Ember Cecilia.
lunaatje123 chapter 27 . 10/15/2014
Thank you for the story! You made a very interesting twist on the whole time-travel thing that has been done so often before in HP fanfiction. Very enjoyable and a really cool interpretation of the premise.
slmncpm chapter 27 . 10/12/2014
awwww what a way to end this! i found it after you did all the retrofitting, as it were, and i love it. thank you so much for sharing this with us. *hands you scones*
Shamille101 chapter 27 . 8/29/2014
No! I want to know the long story!
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