Reviews for Coexistence |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely fascinating story. I had a very hard time putting it down. Kudos, and cookies! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, I almost completely skipped over this story when I saw that it was a Harry in the Marauder's time story because I /hate/ those with a passion. I'm glad that I didn't this time though. It was brilliant. I do kinda wish that everyone had found out the truth about Harry at some point, just to see the faces of the jerks get rubbed in it, but I can see why you went the way you did. It did have a bit of poignance just letting his real identity fade away given the theme of the story and how he felt about it. I'm very glad that Remus finally learned the truth though. And that they got to meet back up again. |
![]() ![]() Overall this is a very interesting article, amazing settings and plot, good writing. But there are also some regrets. First, Dumbledore has been made to be unbearably paranoid, which I can not accept. Second, it was so sad that Ron and Hermione, as Harry's closest friends, couldn't see him. Third, Harry was supposed to be the one who wanted to know his parents, but he spent more time talking to Peter ,Snape and others that it was hard for me to is clearly Harry should be colser to his parients. In the end, I think Harry's obsession with keeping his last name a secret has done more harm than good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was so cute. Such a unique take on the time travel cliche too. Very well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So he’s not named Harry James Potter? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Petunia is at Hogwarts? |
![]() ![]() ![]() How did Thomas die?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thomas is taking this relatively well. I hope Harry tells people his surname. He gets to know his grandparents! |
![]() ![]() ![]() How is he in his own body but also still in James mind? |
![]() ![]() ![]() James and Lily never dated until I think Sixth Year. So Harry isn’t in his own body, he’s in James. I hope je get his own body. Love that Snape owes him a wizarding debt. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uh, did Harry really die? I loved seeing Snape’s internal dialogue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OK. I liked and disliked this story. It was more the back and forth and difference from canon/fanon, but obviously an AU. His changing the universe of a different universe was intriguing. After all, the story said Lily was his girlfriend of three years, when in canon it was just the last year, so an obvious alternate universe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Almost didn't read because of some upset reviews on this story, but I'm glad I did. It kept my interest well enough for me to binge. And while I wasn't completely happy with that ending, I think I can be content with it. Good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic story! A few leftover questions though: Did petunia ever have kids? Did Lily ever stop being such a bitch about Harry? Did the rest of them ever find out that Harry was Harry Potter? Will there be a side story with what Remus was up to? I know he would have had to travel out of the castle, or could have had her come there, but why didn't Harry travel through Molly? |
![]() ![]() ![]() How did a simple incendio work to get rid of the diary? Normally it'd need at least fiendfyre fire-wise, unless it's just that much easier in your story? |