|Reviews for Please Stay|
| Emmy07 chapter 6 . 4/24/2016
WOW! So I just finished this story and I was totally glued. I stayed up later than I should've last night just to get a couple chapters in!
I have to say, it was a total mind f**k to see Erica go down the path that she did. It totally wasn't her, but it wasn't unexpected considering who she had to hang out with. One thing that pissed me off was how Amanda and Michael acted (they weren't much better than Erica), and how some of the characters even referred to Erica as a (spoiled) brat. I completely disagree with it. Absolutely, she was out of line and in no way am I condoning how she acted, but it's hard for a kid to feel the way she did, especially since she never got proper help for her issues, which she is still definitely struggling with. Michael really pissed me off in the fifth chapter, when he resorted to getting physical with her (and I'm not even referring to him *apparently* almost slapping her).
I have a friendly writing tip for you. You would state how Erica felt, but going into detail with those kinds of things really helps the reader try to truly understand how she's truly feeling. Like when she says "it" makes her chest hurt. You can go on to say something like, "She felt like a thousand needles were piercing her chest" or "She felt like she was ready to combust". I just wanted to mention that. :)
Anyway, you did a great job on this story! I thoroughly enjoy reading every bit of it! Awesome job.
| Guest chapter 21 . 4/12/2016
This story was absolutely incredible! Would you ever think of writing more like this?
| scrawlx1012 chapter 1 . 9/18/2015
this was awesome :) will my OC Aster from Awkward child be used? Sorry but i cant remeber really need to read this
| READER chapter 1 . 7/12/2015
Plz write michael and amanda fics your totally amazing
| jwill21 chapter 21 . 7/4/2015
Awesome story. I wished everyone got their happy endings though.
| jwill21 chapter 20 . 7/4/2015
Great ending. Loved it.
| jwill21 chapter 19 . 7/4/2015
Good ol Erica and Tracey.
| Guest chapter 21 . 6/30/2015
Please say there's gonna be a threequal!
| gta v chapter 21 . 6/30/2015
Fabulous ending plz write more gta v stories
| Darth Huitzilopochtli chapter 21 . 6/30/2015
Great story! Loved it as I did the last one.
| yinyang754 chapter 21 . 6/29/2015
| Adela chapter 20 . 6/17/2015
love it I can not wait for next chapter
| blasc714 chapter 20 . 6/17/2015
One of the best stories I ever read (:
Please update soon!
| yinyang754 chapter 20 . 6/12/2015
This is amazing.
It's about time that erica showed elizabeth what it feels like to be broken down into a million pieces.
It's been coming for a long time.
| gta5girl chapter 19 . 6/9/2015
This is really good but if you are continuing this story could you write a chapter about maybe michael and amanda talking about Erica and what her punishment is?