Reviews for When it Rains
mystified111 chapter 9 . 4/5/2017
One of the best stories of pokeshipping that I have read...beautiful's painful too..n it's amazing to think that ash and misty have a child ...m really disappointed that u discontinued it :(..I wanted to know that happens next...I hope u complete it one day :/
QUEENSPELLER67 chapter 9 . 8/22/2016
NO! Cliffhanger! *sighs* at least someone picked this up.
QUEENSPELLER67 chapter 8 . 8/22/2016
I bet Chiharu is waking up.
QUEENSPELLER67 chapter 7 . 8/14/2016
...if only Nurse Joy knew.
QUEENSPELLER67 chapter 6 . 7/28/2016
So Chiharu is missing.
QUEENSPELLER67 chapter 5 . 7/26/2016
So she'll tell him the next day?
QUEENSPELLER67 chapter 4 . 7/24/2016
So Misty is having to stay...
QUEENSPELLER67 chapter 3 . 7/24/2016
I wonder who Erika was talking to.
QUEENSPELLER67 chapter 2 . 7/24/2016
Well, Chiharu IS Delia's granddaughter after all.
QUEENSPELLER67 chapter 1 . 7/24/2016
So Delia calls and there's a cliffhanger.
Guest chapter 9 . 7/9/2015
It's been ten years...and I regret not reviewing earlier.
This story was quite heart-breaking, and the mistakes and the arguments were very deep. Ash's obsession with Pokémon created a great opportunity for a plot, and the way you made it was heart-breakingly a way.

I'm a little bit sad that you discontinued this story, but I admire your honestly with the author's note in the end. I completely understand your inspiration loss but hey, the story was beautiful while it lasted...

gn chapter 9 . 6/6/2015
please write the next chapter
this is awesome story
Guest chapter 9 . 3/9/2015
Next chapter! Now! I WANT ANOTHER CHAPTER!
youdontneedtono chapter 9 . 2/28/2015
FUcked up ending
yindragonkiba chapter 9 . 11/29/2014
Heartbreakingly sad but also good
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