Reviews for An Outsider's Look at the Pines Twins |
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thesantanicangel925 chapter 16 . 8/15 Oooooooooohhhhhhhhhh. Shite. Shite, shite, shite. Not good. |
thesantanicangel925 chapter 8 . 8/15 Oh shit. Dipper just paraphrased Bills catchphrase, actually kept the last part the same. That’s either good, as in he’s managed to work through the trauma Bill put him through enough to feel comfortable metaphorically spitting in Bill’s eye like that, or that’s bad, as in Bill might of influenced Dipper strongly or even worse isn’t quite gone. |
Pyrophoricity chapter 16 . 8/6 Its the 3rd time i ve read your story because it s one of the best of the fandom for me Thanks again ! |
Guest chapter 19 . 1/4 Awww this was so cute. I love the Dipcifica part the most though, it made me squel. Wish there were more of the last one actually, it sounds intriguing. |
redandready45 chapter 11 . 5/29/2023 I like how Pacifica is that snobby girl who, while becoming kinder, can still be vindictive. As the saying goes, those who mess with friendly people find out those nice people have good friends who don't want anything to happen to them. |
redandready45 chapter 15 . 5/29/2023 I love your take on the Pines's parents. I don't think the counselor is a bad person per se, but she does seem to be the kind of person who, in following the letter of the law, unwittingly stifles the creativity of her charges. It is nice to see parents who are supportive of their children and their oddities. |
Guest chapter 19 . 3/4/2023 DIPCIFICA WINS! Pacifica is such a badass, cold quee and I am living for it. Love the confidence she has and I love that she is incredibly smart, and if what I can glean from this is right, entirely efficient and merciless when it comes to what she wants. So accurate to her character! I still ship Isaac with Mabel I do not know how you managed to get me hooked in that pair but they are still so adorable- aw, I am so sad that this is the last chapter. I really want another one with Wil who seems to have finally peaced things together. This is such a great and cute story, wish it was longer, but I understand that this is all you planned. Still a cool story, a one of a kind. The Pines could probably become a local legend if they try hard enough at this point. Thank you for this novel, its really really really good like I cannot explain how good and how satisfied I am after reading anyway thanks love it byeeeeee |
Guest chapter 18 . 3/4/2023 TARUN IS BACK! and so is Gideon. Ngl, I laughed when Gideon screamed it never happened, that is so accurate to his character I actually heard him scream it in my head. Lol. So did the part where Mabel started chanting, Pines, Pines, Pines- that took me back. Aww, I am so glad that the family tradition of chanting their last names in front of their fallen enemies still lives on. And yes, mabel is badass. |
Guest chapter 17 . 3/4/2023 Dang. I love this chapter. Like, wow. Gotta say, I love how Bipper keeps referring to Mabel as shooting star. I don't know why, it just hits a feels good bone in me, like its creepy but appropriate. Love how they interacted here, honestly, another wonderful chapter that I dearly love |
Guest chapter 16 . 3/4/2023 Circe is back and she's as powerful as ever! Sad about the wizard thing, but it is understandable, it made Dipper as strong if not stronger so its fine- is that Dipcifica- |
Guest chapter 15 . 3/4/2023 Gotta love ourselves some supportive parents who are completely still in love. I love this reiteration of the parents, cause they might be as weird as the twin- they have got to inherit it somewhere. And if they accepted Waddles, then they most likely are accepting. Yes, I love these parents so much. |
Guest chapter 14 . 3/4/2023 Hmm, yes, I like Tarun. Very open minded, and a plausible congressman in the future like how our dear darling Mabel is right now |
Guest chapter 13 . 3/4/2023 WENDY IS HERE AND SHE IS AS COOL AS SHE ALWAYS HAS BEEN RRRRRAAAAAA This is so cool of a chapter |
Guest chapter 12 . 3/4/2023 Another casual display of power from the twins copying their grunkles and taking their lessons at heart and applying them. The best combination of sweet and disastrous and vindicating. This is one of my favorite chapter simply for the normalized threatening that the twins are doing. But like, under the court of law, that contract is not binding under duress- though that probably is not a contract of the law of man but of the law of magic which is probably more binding than a legal one- |
Guest chapter 11 . 3/4/2023 This is so cool, Pacifica coming in clutch- to save who is still up for debate. And yes! Dipper and Pacifica are talking enough that their life within the school and its gossip is easily discussed! I am seeing it as a ship and no one can stop me- |