Reviews for Being Us |
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![]() ![]() Good story, but you use the word "sweetie" is WAY overused. It gets a bit irritating. I like everything else though! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm gonna miss this story :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yayyyyy! Back together at last! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww that last bit was soooooooo cute! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() :P Good one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was a bit surprised that Al hasn't forgiven Diane yet, but I understand if he was holding a grudge. After all, I am a Slytherin myself and daughter of Hades/Nemesis. Hades because their fatal flaw is holding grudges, and Nemesis because I always have to get back at that person for doing something or another. Anyways... Can you clarify what "read chapter" box you mean? I haven't got the foggiest. I'm going to sign this review with my full title, just for the fun of it :) ~Her Highness, Miss Lady Enigma "Stiletto" Malfoy, the daughter of Nemesis who was sorted into the ancient and most noble house of Slytherin _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() lmao at Di save with writing a nasty letter to James! Lol. Oh Al! Just forgive her! She's really sorry! Can't wait for roses bday party |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely loved this chapter. At first when she's like I'm getting naked I was as shocked as Albus lol. Like what? And then she explained that that's how she made him feel. It was truly the most perfect apology. And I can't believe Al thought she was prancing him. How evil would that have been! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I didn't expect that. I don't know what I should think of her idea. She is really brave and bold... But the idea is definitely unique. Albus had to stop and hear her out. I think she did great, she thought quickly and I was really impressed by her comparison. I hope the get over the whole keeping it a secret-issue. All in all, I am as always thrilled. I really liked this chapter and Lily and James are just bloody brilliant! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I need to apologize in advance if you update the next few weeks an I don't get I review, cause I'm (finally) going in vacay-Woohoo! Anyways... *yelps in excitement and falls off chair* We're getting to the good part! I LURVED the chapter! One of the best make-up scenes I've read. Me: *grimaces*Do I sound like a pervert? Author: *silence* Me: well... I thank you for that vote of confidence... I promise you that I'm not. I swear. That hit shows how off topic I can be... _ Xx, Enigma |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwww that was great!:) did she have sex with him though? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't wait to see what James has in mind! I'm glad she has Scorp and Rose back! |
![]() ![]() ![]() :O loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol not mad at you but sometimes Di is a real dumbass lol. Seriously? Is the secret that important that guys unconscious for 3 days n u don't just bite the bullet n go see him. Poor Albus! N rose n Scorp at 2nd base! Lol |