Reviews for The Eternal Torment of Tayuya Uzumaki
Guest chapter 22 . 10/9
Shame this story is abounded
UltimateGohanssj10 chapter 22 . 4/30
Do all uzumakis have talk no jutsu? Or is it just protagonist speshul?
Ok, since this is my last review until your next chapter(which knowing you will take a *few* more years) I'll iterate all my likes and dislikes of this story...
Likes: Fu's characterization, Tayuya and Fu's interactions, Naruto and Tayuya's interactions, basicaly most of Tayuya's interactions with people. The fight scenes were *amazing*!
Now, Dislikes: Honestly, there aren't much, but basically most of ten and eleven. I don't know why exactly, but I found myself skimming past these chapters most of the time... and that's it!
This is definitely one of the best stories on this website, like all your stories honestly...
My favorite chapter was definitely chapter 20, the way you seamlessly transitioned a almost half a year was amazing. Talks with Kurama showed just how much of a tsundere he truly is, which I loved...
I know I'm just saying the same thing over and over, but seriously great story. Hope it doesn't take you too long to write the next chapter...
Anyway, great story bye now!
UltimateGohanssj10 chapter 21 . 4/30
Well, now you have 550 followers for this story...
so yeah, awesome story.
UltimateGohanssj10 chapter 20 . 4/30
This chapter was amazing. Yes Kurama is indeed the god of Tsunderes. nice training/characterization montage...
UltimateGohanssj10 chapter 19 . 4/30
Kaguya-shadowing eh?
UltimateGohanssj10 chapter 18 . 4/30
Good chappie...
UltimateGohanssj10 chapter 17 . 4/30
...Huh, so are you doing a naruto sasuke slash in this? The way Naruto reacted was oddly specific, and yes I know thats the same way he reacts in the anime as well. But unlike the anime you arent afraid of writing same sex relationships...
UltimateGohanssj10 chapter 16 . 4/30
Also, did she just leave Fu's body in the cave?
UltimateGohanssj10 chapter 16 . 4/30
Good chapter...
UltimateGohanssj10 chapter 15 . 4/30
Soooooo, she's immortal now? Also how're you planning to bring back fu?
UltimateGohanssj10 chapter 11 . 4/30
The drama was great. Buuuut, the conversations in the past few chapters(nine onwards), was a bit stilted... Other than that it was great.
UltimateGohanssj10 chapter 10 . 4/29
IT was kinda cliche, but interesting enough...
UltimateGohanssj10 chapter 9 . 4/29
not forever, just nine chapters and what is probably seventy(?) thousand words.
UltimateGohanssj10 chapter 8 . 4/29
yes, I do like the chapter...
UltimateGohanssj10 chapter 7 . 4/29
Tayuya: Why, why am I still alive?
Me: enso really really wanted to write a fanfic about a minor character and your name kinda sounds like Taylor...

Not that I mind. This fic is amazing.
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