Reviews for The Shark in the Moonless Night |
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![]() ![]() I’m sorry, did you just have Ichigo struggle against Tia? The Ichigo that kill Aizen is struggling with someone that is literal leagues below even Ulquiorra? Look I can suspend disbelief for something’s, but that is just ridiculous. And this is the revised story? Did you have him outright lose in the original or something? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent chapter. Looking forward to reading more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A great update, keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn so many plotlines moving, the ancients are becoming more active, yoruichi is finally gonna tell ichigo and tia whats happening with her family, and the quincys are beginning to send out scouts. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really think the wall and the whole other squad is a dumb idea... Zero Squad was enough of an ass pull since they should have gotten involved with Aizen given his goal involved the soul king but this whole wall thing makes no sense even with how convoluted Bleach can be. That said I like seeing the Wandereich getting involved and seeing some OC Sternritters isn't bad, I hope you focus more on the Quincies instead of the wall. |
![]() ![]() ![]() glad to see you updating again I love the original story and I'm glad to see the story going to hopefully get finished |
![]() ![]() ![]() 1, Between Yhwach and the ancients, they are between a rock and a hard place. 2. Are we sure that her brother is the culprit? 3. We’re almost caught up to where the old one ended. Will he reboot it again? Come & find out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You need to go back and clean up the grammar and typos in earlier chapters |
![]() ![]() ![]() This entire series is really good, hell it's one of the few fanfics that I would like to see a manga/anime adaptation (which is weird to say because it's based off of a manga/anime) but (not that it's your fault or anything) I was actually expecting there to be more sexual content the reason being he sorta has a harem but the main reason is on Tia's birthday you have a lemon there which as you know is the first time there was any sexual content but for the rest of the times where you know they did have sex or anything you skipped over it which is unexpected but not a problem like I said I would fully like to see this get a manga adaptation so not having it in there makes sense. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad to see this story return and I will continue to eagerly await updates. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Is yoruichi preggers? Is that why she’s avoiding them? |
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