Hi there
How are you? I hope I’m not causing any inconvenience. I recently read your story "The Shark in the Moonless Night" and genuinely enjoyed it. I’ve been thinking about turning it into a comic in my style, and I believe it would be an exciting commission project. I'm confident you would also be pleased with the results and might even consider sharing it.

As an experienced digital artist, I am currently open for commissions, and I would love to adapt your wonderful story into a comic format. If you're interested in commissioning me for this project, we can discuss the details further either in the general chat or on Discord.

My Discord is lisakatagiri,

and I’d be happy to chat about pricing, timelines, and how we can bring your story to life in a visually engaging way.

Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Thank you!

Is yoruichi preggers? Is that why she’s avoiding them?

Welcome back

glad to see an update for this one, definitely looking forward to the next!

So its kinda like the source wall from DC but even more creepy af. That does not bring me comfort, god knows whats on the other side

A great update, keep up the good work.

This is my absolute favorite story im so glad you’re back!

NO WAY

Holy shit I wasn't expecting this to update! Great chapter, hope to see more!

Thanks for the chapter and happy holidays!

been a long time since i first read this story been wondering if its ever going to be updated...

i really do hope you finish this story! its so damn good!

I takeit that you used a translator to translate the german words from something like this: Yes! Faster Heinrich! Faster ! That is great!Ahhh but the grammer is wrong . It should be : Ja! Scgneller Heinrich! Schneller ! ( in this context ) Das ist es! Ahhh!

Amazing story 9.7/10, the rape was a it too much tho. Ichigo being made the kido comander was fantastic, and i am gessing that he is so genius at kido cuz his quincy heritage. The trial of the shadows was good idea, it adds charm to the kido corps

Been switching between the original and the rewrite here, and personally i find youre rewrite to be even more abhorrently grammatically fucked up, far too obnoxious as well as way too overly fast paced as well, also you cut out some very good moments for tia and ichigo there as well, i also feel as if youve changed certain parts of the orignal here and not in a good way. I definitely remember that ichigo had initially scolded shinji for not telling the rest of the vizards about tia and not hachi instead, i also think creating an overly cheesy and obnoxious competition for ichigo between tia and the other girls is stupid as fuck. I fail to see how this childish display of affection is in any way more realistic than other harem stories as you claim it to be. It just feels like an overall waste of time and major hinderance to ichigos overall love life here and having him constantly beating around the bush when he already has tia as his girlfriend and already admitted to having strong feelings for yoruichi is just dowright disrespectful. I had really hoped that you would change that and not make ichigo an even more annoying ass fucking prude than he is in canon, also was hoping youd actually simmer down ichigos whole hollow trying to take control of his body shtick as i think that aspect of his character is more of a nuisance than anything...and despite my overall love for this story and more particularly tia and ichigos relationship here, im starting to heavily dislike the forced drama between tia and the other girls here. You just gave tia such a deep intricate and heartfelt backstory and now your forcefully making it so that ichigo is being fought over like a goddamn peace of meat and just said this was a more realistic take on relationships? That is pretty absurd dude. Also didnt you have ichigo CLEARLY state that he would never abandon tia nor hurt her in any way? That is just foul writing to do that to her character after all shes been through with ichigo. I dont know what happened between this and the original write, but for gods sake can you at least mellow out the characters here and not make everyone seem like their on crack or are fucking children? Everything here so far is just way more overly goddamn chilidsh and adds no nuance to most of the mian characters here. I also really despise the way youre making yoruichi far more predatorial towards ichigo here. That is just fucking disgusting to me tbh. I really hope you just continue the original at this point and stop with this terrible rewrite because theres close to zero signifcant changes anyway, with the exception of the more forced childish dialouge as well as the overly terrible character interactions here.