It's nice to see an update to this after so long, was a fun chapter. Tia needs so much more love, both from the fandom and from Kubo himself. Hated that he basically left her hanging quite literally after the Quincy attacked Hueco Mundo.

Also, don't get your hopes up for TYBW after Kubo wrote himself into a corner with Ywach, I doubt the director for the anime adaptation will manage to do any better.

Nice to see you're still kicking!
Great work on this chapter, much improved over the original. I was waiting the the Chad panty moment. Ha!

Thank you for the great chapter! Your writing has significantly improved this pass-through. Thanks again!

What a nice surprise to see the update! and a wonderful chapter at that too. A feels good chapter and some good progress without any of the really bad stuff hanging over everyone, well done!

This was such a welcome surprise gonna have to reread the story its been a while but its my favorite Ichigo/Tia/Yoruichi Fic. Love the chapter too. Hope life gets better and you can write more soon.

Man, glad to have you back! Hope your days stay less turbulent.

Do I’m reading the first chapter and I’m liking what I’m reading. Ok so far. Then I see something that doesn’t spelling disaster for the fic but can be a bit of bad habit if I don’t address. You tell a character’s emotions too much. You need to show their emotions and allow the reader to interpret a character’s emotion for themselves. For, example when Ichigo wakes up during chapter one, you say that Rukia and Orehime are happy and talke him to the ground. This is ok don’t get me wrong but I think the scene could been shown rather than told. In other words I want you as a writer to show me facial expressions. Tell me they talked Ichigo to the ground buried their heads in his chest crying and telling him he’s an idiot for nearly dying on them. The same goes for the other characters. Don’t tell me Ichigo is fearful of Unohana in the scene, show me his expression. Make him quiver, sweat drop, or freeze as a way of showing he is fearful. A good rule of thumb is to show, don’t tell when it comes to emotion. The other thing I noticed is that while the characters I mentioned tell rather show emotion Chad in the next sentence is chilling over here by showing his emotions. “A gentle grab to his should and a small smile” is showing emotions. This is what I recommend you do for your writing. It’s what professional writers do, it’ll improve your writing one hundred fold and you’ll get more enjoyment out of reading your own work. Of course this is one man’s opinion so do what you will.

Good to see you're alive.
Great chapter, I really like how you develop the plot and the characters at the same time.
The little interactions are what's best for me though, they really shine more than most other stories out there.
That and your willingness to tackle difficult themes to digest.
May I suggest to you posting this to AO3 too?
Though not overly displayed these more mature themes could get this story purged from this site.
There you won't have that problem and there's also a quite engaged fanbase over there.
I hope I helped with constructive feedback
Over and out

I loved this chapter and the story! Cannot wait for the next one!

Glad to see your back also u got any ichigo x unohana lemons or fanfictions or any more fanfictions like this?

No way this story is back again!

1. Why did Pua say “your” aren’t they biological sisters?!
2. Tia is 15 (95 - 9) 15 86 101?
3. Hale was her honorary uncle if memory serves?
4. Will Pua appear in the Soul Society?
5. Why are all the lemons glossed over? We got Tia & Ichigo the 1st then you skipped his & Yoruichi’s 1st together, the 3some after he overcame his trauma & now 2 others this chapter!

Bleach unfortunately, is in Disney jail, a worse jail than Netflix.

Muy buena