Reviews for The Shark in the Moonless Night |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I like this than your original. As it was a the short version of the story that we know and love. Keep up the good, old friend. Helmsmanjoker out |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is very good, your doing a great job so far. But if I may ask, did you add any parts about Yoruichi because in the original it seemed like she just popped out of nowhere |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter as usual. so...3 chapters in 1? keep up the good work |