Did Neo just talk?! I thought she was mute!

The height is fine, seeing how Shirou is canonically 5’5 to 5’7 feet. Also, I feel that Shirou is being ignored pretty heavily in favor for Jaune when Shirou is supposed to be the main character. There are too many Jaune fics, and even if I know I’m insignificant in the grand scheme of things, I WILL quit this story if I see it become some Jaune Arc fic because of this fandoms stupid obsession with the guy.

I doubt ANYONE wants to be a hero as much as Shirou does.

I beg you, don't make this a Jaune Arc fic. There are too many of those in RWBY.

Also, what Shirou uses is magecraft, not Magic. Magic/Sorcery is the thing that True Magic users and Sorcerers use, and there are very few in the world. Like, enough to count on one hand. A Reality Marble is infinitesimally close to True Magic/Sorcery, but still a magecraft. Shirou IS a 3rd rate and barely knows much about these sorts of things in UBW, so I guess I'll forgive it.

Fun fact: Shirou had a job at the Copenhagen because he didn't want to rely on Kiritsugu's inheritance and the money from the Fujimura Yakuza.

Update?

Loving the story right now! I need more of this!

Now I get why Fate/RWBY crossover fics are mostly dead. Most of them have retarded MCs that only exist for the convenience of the readers. Or maybe the MCs that are made are just poorly written lmao.

Really? Shirou shouldn't be this "nice" they nearly got someone killed because of their stupidity. Such light punishment. Even id Shirou is nice, doesn't mean Ozpin is.

This entire chapter was a complete misunderstanding and I loved it. Nice one Author

Nice

Whoa Gil is also here that's fucking cool, and it is truly the coolest name for an ability.

your story is amazing, when will you continue it? TT

Wow so interesting, i'm follow reading

Idiots. No wonder I hated Team RWBY so much. So nosy.