Wow so interesting, i'm follow reading

Idiots. No wonder I hated Team RWBY so much. So nosy.

why does this remind off the scene of Venom rescuing Kaz in MGSV?

Ugh. Just no. I get Shirou being naive but he was just downright stupid. It completely decharacterized him. Similarly he does not get close to people so easily. His depression wouldn't allow it, especially being separated from Rin and friends, relationships that took years to develop. We should be seeing more inner conflict with Shirou as he resisted getting friends, and this was not a friend relationship. The girls did not bond with him, they just got some of his information. And while some of it is understandable, it is still stupid how entitled they felt when the relationship was not that deep. Jaune had a much closer relationship, and there we even saw the conflict of Shirou wanting to remain obscure while also supporting his dreams, and teach him how to survive.
And lastly, I thought shirou learned of avalon during his and archer's fight, or at least that he had an artifact capable of healing.

I am really hating Shirou just blindly trusting someone with such dangerous secrets. I mean did it EVER occur to him Ozpin is the evil one? Maybe give Ozpin a measure of trust sure, but not exposing everything or his abilities.

Good read

promising story my ass...

this is stupid... how gullible is he?
it's like your forcing him in the first place.

And this chapter made me realize that u don’t believe in righting wrongs
Love the idea of the story but I now hate your writing

And this chapter made me realize that u don’t believe in righting wrongs
Love the idea of the story but I now hate your writing

Ozpin knows she’s likely to misunderstand so he wouldn’t have left it like that
I like your story but parts of it are just plain stupid

Really he doesn’t get shit other than a half assed apology that seems shallow

Damn crying shame that this fic hasn't been updated in so long, as it is honestly one of the best fate x-overs on the site. For real, the fact that it'sbeen left to the wayside s a legitimate tragedy. Anyway, though I know it isn't likely, hope this gets updated soon, as it is some quality work, and deserves to be continued.

Thanks for the chapter hope you update again would like to read more

I'm fucking mad this shit is infuriating(very well written fanfic)chapter 6 fucking dumbasses