Reviews for Fate Recondite |
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PanzerJ chapter 6 . 9/6/2021 This entire chapter was a complete misunderstanding and I loved it. Nice one Author |
Masterboy chapter 10 . 6/30/2021 Nice |
taiwoeretan1 chapter 9 . 6/24/2021 Whoa Gil is also here that's fucking cool, and it is truly the coolest name for an ability. |
ita123 chapter 10 . 3/31/2021 your story is amazing, when will you continue it? TT |
Diamond of soul chapter 1 . 2/16/2021 Wow so interesting, i'm follow reading |
Auren02 chapter 5 . 2/12/2021 Idiots. No wonder I hated Team RWBY so much. So nosy. |
Thefallenjedi66 chapter 4 . 12/15/2020 why does this remind off the scene of Venom rescuing Kaz in MGSV? |
MysticRising chapter 10 . 11/10/2020 Ugh. Just no. I get Shirou being naive but he was just downright stupid. It completely decharacterized him. Similarly he does not get close to people so easily. His depression wouldn't allow it, especially being separated from Rin and friends, relationships that took years to develop. We should be seeing more inner conflict with Shirou as he resisted getting friends, and this was not a friend relationship. The girls did not bond with him, they just got some of his information. And while some of it is understandable, it is still stupid how entitled they felt when the relationship was not that deep. Jaune had a much closer relationship, and there we even saw the conflict of Shirou wanting to remain obscure while also supporting his dreams, and teach him how to survive. And lastly, I thought shirou learned of avalon during his and archer's fight, or at least that he had an artifact capable of healing. |
MysticRising chapter 3 . 11/10/2020 I am really hating Shirou just blindly trusting someone with such dangerous secrets. I mean did it EVER occur to him Ozpin is the evil one? Maybe give Ozpin a measure of trust sure, but not exposing everything or his abilities. |
MiaMorn chapter 10 . 10/20/2020 Good read |
Just an IsekaI writer chapter 2 . 8/9/2020 promising story my ass... |
Just an IsekaI writer chapter 1 . 8/9/2020 this is stupid... how gullible is he? it's like your forcing him in the first place. |
Crainium9 chapter 7 . 7/24/2020 And this chapter made me realize that u don’t believe in righting wrongs Love the idea of the story but I now hate your writing |
Crainium9 chapter 7 . 7/24/2020 And this chapter made me realize that u don’t believe in righting wrongs Love the idea of the story but I now hate your writing |
Crainium9 chapter 5 . 7/24/2020 Ozpin knows she’s likely to misunderstand so he wouldn’t have left it like that I like your story but parts of it are just plain stupid |