| Reviews for Hermione Granger and the Serpent's Renaissance |
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   TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 91 . 7/27/2020 It is clever of Harry to be making arrangements to use snakes to gather intel on the maze during the final task. Impressive powers of deduction to have come up with the kidnapping via portkey scenario. :-) |
| TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 90 . 7/27/2020 I like how candid the four werewolves were when speaking with Hermione and Cassius. :D |
| JellyPark chapter 4 . 7/26/2020 Threstals were domesticated by Hagrid in canon. But satisfied with the story anyways. |
| TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 89 . 7/26/2020 Hermione's merry band of Scoobies, the Nocturne Group. ;D Severus IS truly a sweetheart to attempt to ensure that Hermione has all of her bases covered. :-) |
| ZhaWarudo chapter 3 . 7/26/2020 Why would Neville proclaim in front Hermione he just met, I made a friend, I am almost a squib? Isn't that something super embarrassing considering it is embarrassing and he's a child, therefore super. Sight I wish you didn't start this as a crackfic but it's ok so far so I'll see how it goes. |
| TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 88 . 7/25/2020 I liked the usage of viewing screens for the second task, and that Hermione was able to bow out of participating as a hostage. Well done - keep up the good work. :-) |
| TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 87 . 7/25/2020 Cassius and Emmanuel make for good war council members (for their knowledge and suggestions). Yeah, she risks Severus learning too many of her secrets, but I believe that the two of them dueling against the other, for practice, will be good for them both. :-) |
| TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 86 . 7/25/2020 Wow, that was an intense and exciting duel. o.0 |
| JellyPark chapter 98 . 7/23/2020 It was an exiting story, so intricately planned. I would love to see the next chapters sooner than later. For another idea, shouldn't the imperious curse be it's own counter-curse since if you imperious an already imperioused person to 'act of free will', they will be able to resist the former imperious? Also, I've noticed Salazar's wand was different from canon, Pottermore says it's core is basilisk horn. (But the wand he has made also had said to be passed down to his descendants, the one in Gringgotts could supposedly be different) All I could want more is having more definite terms of when the story resumes. (Wow, I'm infected with formal writing) |
| TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 85 . 7/22/2020 Aww, Severus is so dang cute when he worries about Hermione. I hope that he is the one that will eventually be romantically paired up with her. ;D |
| TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 84 . 7/22/2020 Severus' continued concern for Hermione is heart warming. :-) |
| TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 83 . 7/22/2020 Interesting gathering. Since Sal did not reveal herself to those at the gathering, I'm wondering when it will occur. o.0 |
| TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 82 . 7/22/2020 I'm wondering if Hermione/Sally will use a disguise, or her own identity, when meeting with Lucius. :-) |
| Guest chapter 98 . 7/22/2020 CAN'T WATE FOE YEAR 5! |
| Shakari chapter 98 . 7/21/2020 so I definitely feel like Theo recognized Hermione's perfume in the last chapter. and that, with the offer of sanctuary there is large potential for him to observe Slytherin and see that yes, she may have several other similarities to Sally that he would recognize being a good friend of her's and as someone who also has affections for her he probably paid more attention to smaller things, like smell or movement and way of holding oneself. or Sal's preferred way of steepling her fingers together |