Reviews for Hermione Granger and the Serpent's Renaissance
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 52 . 7/17/2020
Did Sally obliviate Remus, Harry, and Ron about her having cast a corporeal patronus on the Hogwarts Express? If so, it would explain Remus' nagging feeling about Sally/Hermione.
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 51 . 7/17/2020
It was good of Sally to introduce her group of friends to the RoR, and the idea of having members of other houses join them.
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 50 . 7/17/2020
Nice change-up of boggarts. I also liked Sally working on reeling/luring in Tommy-boy.
:-)
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 49 . 7/17/2020
Nice choice of spells Hermione is offering her customers; I also like her business plan to eventually share the spells, and sell percentages of the business to her employees.

Nice patronus there Sal.
;D

"'Dear Diary, today was positively dreadful...'" - And so it begins. LOL
;p
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 48 . 7/17/2020
I'm happy for Sal that her homestead is in fantastic shape.

It is admirable that she doesn't believe everything that she hears/reads; especially on the topic of Sirius Black.

She is a savvy one in her choice of shop to run/items offered.
:-)
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 47 . 7/17/2020
That was truly a heartfelt "love of friends/goodbye letter"... it brought tears to my eyes.
:')

Well done - love the story - keep up the good work.
:-)
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 46 . 7/17/2020
Theo, having been the one to send the love note/valentine from Ron to Lockhart, out of revenge for Ron having implied (in first year) that Theo and Sally were making the beast-with-two-backs, was a nice touch.

Aww, Godric, Helga, and Rowena are such sweethearts and true friends to Salazar to have placed his home under a fidelius type charm to preserve it for his return.
:'D
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 45 . 7/17/2020
'...An ye harm none, do as ye will.

And ever mind the Rule of Three:
What ye send out, comes back to thee...'

That Hermione gave the dirtbag his own medicine, times three - I love it!
;P
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 44 . 7/17/2020
Clever usage of:
* color change
* two-way mirrors
* howlers
* news conference
and
* people expectations.

Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 43 . 7/17/2020
Eek... pay no attention to the man behind the curtain... please don't thwart my carefully laid plans... damn... back to the drawing board.
LOL
;P
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 42 . 7/17/2020
HA! The article in the Daily Prophet was brilliant in that it put it out there the benefits to all the passing of the amendment would bring, and the implied backing of DumbOldDoor - very clever/sneaky indeed.
;D
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 41 . 7/17/2020
Damn DumbAsADoor for having put the seed of doubt into Arthur's mind regarding the amendment!
(
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 40 . 7/17/2020
Planning, planning, always planning... at least the students got an explanation as to why they should back off of trying to get Lockhart tossed out on his colorful backside.

I'm glad that Hermione's letter campaign appears to be going well.
:-)
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 39 . 7/17/2020
Those were some clever letters that Hermione wrote to Arthur and Lucius - very promising indeed.
:-)
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 38 . 7/17/2020
Hmm, very clever of Hermione to have placed her books in a position to be distributed/sold to dark families, and thus spread the word/message.

The amendment proposed by Hermione would be beneficial to both sides of the issue... hopefully Percy will get his head out of his uptight backside and realize this and give it a go in introducing it to the Wizengamot members.

Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)

.-.-. F.Y.I. - error found needing correction:
""He always gets his knicker in a twist whenever we have any fun,"..." ["his knicker in a twist" ought to be "his knickers in a twist"]
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