I like what you did with first year; especially Hermione/Sally's efforts to bring her name into better light, drag Slytherin house of of their ugly ideals, and network with students from other houses.

Well done - keep up the good work.
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It is brilliant that Hermione still has her previous self's animagus form, even if the colors have changed due to her being different physically.

It was good of her to have assisted the Headmaster in his confrontation with Quirrellmort.

Hmm, it is great that someone as knowledgeable as Sal was able to put the clues together to come up with Moldyshorts having made at least one horcrux.

Well done - keep up the good work.
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.-.-. F.Y.I. - errors found needing correction:
1) "But that didn't mean anyone had to gambol their lives either." ["gambol" ought to be "gamble"; The definition of "gambol" is to run or jump about playfully. The definition of "gamble" (in your sentence) is to take risky action in the hope of a desired result.]
2) "With that, a black cloud rose from the back the back of Quirinus's skull." ["...rose from the back the back of Quirinus's..." ought to be "...rose from the back of Quirinus's..."; one too many "the back".]; ["Quirinus's skull" ought to be "Quirinus' skull"];
3) "Salazar had studies souls more than enough during his life,..." ["studies" ought to be "studied"]

Good God Gertie! Poor Hermione to have been accused of going out after hours to have under-aged sex in a broom closet... as if! That is what empty classrooms are for. LOL
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It is great that Harry sided with Sally regarding making friends, and studying with some of the Slytherins.

Thank you ever so much for writing such a delightful/enjoyable story!
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I love how observant/sharp Sally's Slytherin friends are with clues, and such regarding Hagrid. LOL
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It is fascinating that the Nocturne is a means to measure the strengths and weaknesses of one's magic.

Wow, I agree with Snape, "if only someone [more people] could've read the book sooner."

Nice pranks; especially when the paper snakes startled Malfoy so badly that he pi$$ed himself.
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Ok, so Sally was also present for the attempted making of the true invisibility cloak... cool!

It is pretty cool that Sal was around when the Elder Wand was being conceived/constructed.

It is good that the Bloody Baron remembers vividly the details of Sally's accomplishments; and that Harry looked into, and shared what he found out about Slytherin. I'm looking forward to reading Malfoy's reaction to discovering that they had it all wrong.

Hmm, I wonder what is up with the Weasley twins.

Thank the gods for the last line of your author's note!
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It is good of Blaise to have asked Theo and Daphne to join in his secret to his success in potions.

I liked the three Slytherins observations and comparisons between Sally, and Malfoy.

Hermione/Sally is a true friend/sweetheart to take Harry under her wing in guiding him toward useful books related to his skills.
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It was rather clever of Sal to use the bludger to distract Quilldemort from trying to kill Harry.

I enjoyed Sal messing with Quilldemort's chair, and such.
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