Can't wait...It is 3:35 am and the lights are almost out and trying to type... sorry if this doesn't read clearly will try to clean it up in the am, if not, sorry!
Mind not working clearly, trying to say, looking forward without peaking to see what is coming. Have been enjoying story, thank you...

The bogart part was fine, not too much and not too little. I'm afraid that I am some what lost, probably because I am trying to do Hermione's life with out the time turner...no sleep and too much to do. Its 2:10 am and my brain is scrambled...
About the last chapter and your question about the right balance of too much emotion and too little 's funny because I was thinking when the chapter was heading to the ending that it was well done...! [Big Smile!]

One of the harder things that writers face it to know when to close a chapter when it is time and now try to drag it on and drive their readers away. Good work with this chapter.

You write a wonderful Hagrid! Sounds just as guilty as we did when we were kids and in trouble! HEHEHE You are doing a good job with your characters.

Re. this last AN. Here, here! I do not know if there is a story that I have read that mixed Ron and Hermione that I could stand...

Re. Top of chapter AN.
Good thing to do when you do not know what to do with something. I have seen too many writers keep trying to make something fit and make a MESS! [An OLD advanced writing teacher!] I must say that I am really enjoying your writing. Thank you.
Too bad we do not follow the old ways of speaking to others until given permission to call them by their first names.

Amazing and wonderful, no matter how many times I re-read it.

Dobby... of course.

Then you should eat more sugary treats.

Have to go to bed before the sun is up and I have to finish the laundry and packing for a week's camping and fishing. Steve has started planting the garden...tomatoes, several kinds of onions [ a variety of dry onions called Candy and they are the very best, last a long time with the very best flavor with little spoilage, imagine have the onions in the basement that are fresh in the last part of February!] Anyway, I sit here thinking of what we can do with them in a couple of months. Steve's first in a half inch slice on a hamburger and I think of a big bowl of Potato Salad without the sore stomach! Anyway, I am sitting here thinking of cooking and really enjoying the chapter and along comes Edmund, what a fun conversation. Thank you for your writing!

Just make lockheart get a big head over his new “teaching” and do something stupid. Like vanishing Harry’s arm.

This story is a delight. This is the third time I've reread it. Would love to read the next year once it's posted (and hoping it's not abandoned!)

loving this. hope to hear from you again someday.

but i didn’t and i love it

i can’t believe i didn’t see the gloria rowly henry thing coming