Reviews for Grimm Heir
Funggen chapter 20 . 9/16
This is what All for One feel.. When he Groomed Tomura..
Shigaruby Tomurose-

Guest chapter 1 . 5/15
I love your story pretty sure I first start reading it when it was only about 28 chapters and onwards and now it's basically complete and the squeal to another author of Grimm Wars. But I have a question for you I sometimes read RWBY read/watch the future or other universes so I'm wondering if someone have the idea to do a whole story of RWBY Read "Grimm Heir" would you allow them? And if anyone did do it link or title please I would love to read it.
QAKERS chapter 10 . 5/14
Next thing he says is Yare Yare daze
QAKERS chapter 10 . 5/14
Wait is rojo JOTARO
Able and Table chapter 3 . 1/12
I wonder if the teacher gonna die, let's find on the next chapter!.
Fenrir69 chapter 6 . 12/18/2022
I love the idea of the mask thralls it is so creepy
Fenrir chapter 5 . 12/18/2022
I love how you made the Grimm more complex creatures then the show also do you think you or someone could make a drawing of sliver, Overlord, and pup
keep up the awesome work
MZ1116 chapter 44 . 6/7/2022
I want B
maskedkeeper chapter 46 . 6/4/2022
well, a good person ruby just wouldn't make sense at this point.
My point of view is ruby was like 3 when she was transformed, so where would this good magically come from. She has shown zero regrets at killing and even has enjoyed it, so it also doesn't make sense for her to just stop it and see it as bad. To be good she would need to relearn everything.

The best way I guess if you don't want to just flip the story, is if she somewhat decided to keep yang as a slave and maybe end up rulling humans , instead of just killing them all.
but still can't see it,based on how she acted up till now.
ofc you can also bring back summers mom light ghost, erase her "evil" and some how she is nice right after. kinda of a bullshit approach if you do this, unless she has her memories all erased. still would suck to read.
maskedkeeper chapter 38 . 6/4/2022
I mean
he ain't wrong, summer went out and died, so sure the baby was hers.
but silver is definitely his daughter.
maskedkeeper chapter 24 . 6/3/2022
really love how much a impact red vs blue made with this one scene, some how it's always funny seeing it in fanfics
Gogmazios chapter 1 . 4/30/2022
This was one hell of a ride I have to say thank you for the story you have written I will always be thankful that you have given me this much enjoyment from your writing I hope you continue to enjoy to write just as much as we have enjoyed to read your work and I hope you have a lovely year ahead
Guest chapter 1 . 2/12/2022

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UltraSpink of Da USA chapter 47 . 1/25/2022
Wow what an end to Era, I remember the day I found this story back when you had only posted the first two chapters. And I remember getting obsessed with this story and it's whole uniqueness and how it was so different from everything else at the time. And RWBY was still the hottest thing around and how this world you built fit almost seemlessly into the canon at the time. Man how time flies, but to be honest I expected this would be the case after your uploads became sporadic. At least we know have an idea of what your overall plan was, which is more then I can say for the thousands of other unfinished stories. Dragonblitz had his heart in the right place, but just didn't restrain himself and walked over establish lore without much thought. At least I can finally wrap up my thoughts on how this possibly could have ended. Thanks for the story and fun times DeadRich, I raise my glass to you as a toast. Godspeed
WritingImperium chapter 47 . 1/25/2022
Thank you for passing the story on instead of simply allowing it to waste away. Although your worldbuilding needs a lot of work to create coherent rules and constraints for the characters therein to work around, as you've just acknowledged, you nonetheless created a story that invested me for many hours, I'm grateful for that. I hope you continue to work on your writing in some capacity, I genuinely believe you have a gift in that area. I wish you luck in all your future endeavors, have a wonderful 2022.
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