Reviews for Lost and Loved |
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Feminist chapter 2 . 10/30/2020 There is also a song called last kiss by taylor swift. Its in the speak now album. Listen to it, its calming, but good. |
Feminist chapter 1 . 10/30/2020 I noticed you spelt si instead of she, and that could just be a normal grammar mistake from typing too fast, but i was wondering if you speak spanish. I speak spanish, and my autocorrect always autocorrect words to si, so, yeah. Just wondering... if you do speak spanish, where are you from? Or did you just learn the language but have generally no latin backround. Btw, im mexican. Good work writing your story. Best of luck for future references! |
AriIsDivergent chapter 14 . 10/5/2020 It was a good story... |
rosalindawoods14 chapter 14 . 12/22/2015 this is awesome please update the story |
sologirl18 chapter 14 . 12/19/2015 I would love to be a part of the club! |
Karrie chapter 1 . 12/9/2015 It is an awesome start but you need to do more and keep developing the story. I like that you saved Tris and just injured her. |
Guest chapter 12 . 8/17/2015 Third review in a row... 86 reviews? 4x28 and Tris6 I see what you did there. Keep updating! This fanfic is amazing! -Jennifer |
Guest chapter 11 . 8/17/2015 PLOT TWIST OMG. *tear rolls down face* me: WHO HAZ ONIONS?! |
Guest chapter 10 . 8/17/2015 IF I STAYYYYYY I read the book, cried. Watched the movie, cried. Perfect for the fanfic, cuz Mia is in a coma after an accident and stuff. MAY THE DIVERGENT KITTY FANGIRLING COMMENCE: And this fanfic is amazing and DIVERGENT KITTY IS QUEEN. I swear, Trisara, you need to let me in on you secret of pure Nyan-Cat epicness. Bai -Jennifer :) |
cristina chapter 12 . 8/14/2015 so i really like it but right now i am so scared that tris will not go back to four they where a really good pair |
Soupremacy chapter 1 . 8/15/2015 I've only read the first chapter, but please update as soon as you can, because I already lov this fanfic, and I already cried. So please update soon, |
Divergent Kitty chapter 12 . 8/15/2015 Yay! Christina's family time! :3 It's not often that writers give the spotlight to another character other than the main ones, so this is good. Don't worry about the delays, as long as you don't stress out about this! Keep up the good work, Ash! :D Divergent Kitty |
Divergent Kitty chapter 11 . 6/24/2015 Damn Trissycorn, calm ya tits. Ouch doe... Can't imagine the pain that poor Chrissy and Toby are going through... ;-; Divergent Kitty |
Swagger chapter 11 . 6/16/2015 I like the chapter. I can't wait for the more frequent updates. |
Swagger chapter 7 . 6/16/2015 Yay! You fixed the repeat chapter! |