Reviews for Of the River and the Sea
Big fan chapter 1 . 3/23
Just wanna say, i read this story quite a few years ago, and it is/was the best fic ive ever read.
SpaideZ chapter 1 . 3/24
Just a Spade casually dropping by
inochello chapter 20 . 3/12
The dream segments made me spit take from laughter, especially Zabuza’s. Hilarious!
djoshuaclark chapter 80 . 3/11
RYUUISHI is just like An-chan from tnat Daihatsu WAKE commercial
Memz chapter 12 . 3/8
Yea.. the kids are sick in the head, but what i get from this 12 chapter prologue is that the story is about 2-3 people which are sick in the head and it gets said repeatingly over and over every single chapter.
I kind of toggled into this fic with the thought "Oh it's tagged adventure" So far it has been anything but that. Just a constant reminder that she is fucked in the head, and so is zabuza.
While having an unhealthy obsession to "Obsess" the main character, this is an angsty/Drama fic so far, and i doubt i'll have the pleasure to read this any further, your writing is awesome, however the story is not.
existing nutcase chapter 8 . 2/26
to all the reviews saying "the swearing is too much" grow a back bone because that's life. I love that she swears with creativity. It's strongly connected to the character and the mental instability is PERFECTLY written. Who wouldn't go crazy in that kind of environment?
ashleegrieswell0905 chapter 29 . 2/12
omg when it saidsuiton: ja no kuchi" I heard suiton ya no coochy or is it coochie idk but u get the picture if u dont listen to it
Hapidrop chapter 6 . 2/7
there's excessive swearing in the past few chapters. especially in this one. i think that much swearing wasn't needed at all. hope it changes in the future chapters. i really hate when the main character swears without any reason and it isn't even cool or badass
Exo dog chapter 104 . 1/11
I really enjoyed reading this story and the characters are good to good job on your fan fic
Sofin chapter 104 . 1/11
I truly loved this fic!
KvAT chapter 13 . 1/5
Story is nice, but the writing is... how do I put this, a little too prose-y. Not gonna read further, but it's just personal instead of the fault of the writing itself. One thing to note, though, that I like how you're able to make reading paragraphs of nothing but "telling" fun.
ChinchillaCat chapter 26 . 12/9/2022
I know this is way late but I want to see her finally get to got to that rave! :D
ChinchillaCat chapter 21 . 12/9/2022
So many damn feels. I wasn’t ready for all these damn tears and feelings. Whhhhyy? But in all seriousness this is an amazing chapter. Thank you for taking me on this journey.
Mimi chapter 20 . 12/9/2022
Their dreams are just so sweet and heartbreaking. Love it. Thank you!
Le Visiteur chapter 1 . 10/18/2022
it's the third Time i've read this story. i read it once when it was coming along and i was soooo young. still one of, if not my favorite Naruto OC fanfic. i know how reviews can warm you Heart, so i just thought why not now ? your writing style is Amazing to me, nevermind haters. a lot of people bristle in the comments, arguing with Logic. but i think you have a wonderful grasp on what emotions are, and how illogic they make us. thank you for this story, once again, and be proud 3
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