|Reviews for Of the River and the Sea|
| Big fan chapter 1 . 3/23
Just wanna say, i read this story quite a few years ago, and it is/was the best fic ive ever read.
| SpaideZ chapter 1 . 3/24
Just a Spade casually dropping by
| inochello chapter 20 . 3/12
The dream segments made me spit take from laughter, especially Zabuza’s. Hilarious!
| djoshuaclark chapter 80 . 3/11
RYUUISHI is just like An-chan from tnat Daihatsu WAKE commercial
| Memz chapter 12 . 3/8
Yea.. the kids are sick in the head, but what i get from this 12 chapter prologue is that the story is about 2-3 people which are sick in the head and it gets said repeatingly over and over every single chapter.
I kind of toggled into this fic with the thought "Oh it's tagged adventure" So far it has been anything but that. Just a constant reminder that she is fucked in the head, and so is zabuza.
While having an unhealthy obsession to "Obsess" the main character, this is an angsty/Drama fic so far, and i doubt i'll have the pleasure to read this any further, your writing is awesome, however the story is not.
| existing nutcase chapter 8 . 2/26
to all the reviews saying "the swearing is too much" grow a back bone because that's life. I love that she swears with creativity. It's strongly connected to the character and the mental instability is PERFECTLY written. Who wouldn't go crazy in that kind of environment?
| ashleegrieswell0905 chapter 29 . 2/12
omg when it saidsuiton: ja no kuchi" I heard suiton ya no coochy or is it coochie idk but u get the picture if u dont listen to it
| Hapidrop chapter 6 . 2/7
there's excessive swearing in the past few chapters. especially in this one. i think that much swearing wasn't needed at all. hope it changes in the future chapters. i really hate when the main character swears without any reason and it isn't even cool or badass
| Exo dog chapter 104 . 1/11
I really enjoyed reading this story and the characters are good to good job on your fan fic
| Sofin chapter 104 . 1/11
I truly loved this fic!
| KvAT chapter 13 . 1/5
Story is nice, but the writing is... how do I put this, a little too prose-y. Not gonna read further, but it's just personal instead of the fault of the writing itself. One thing to note, though, that I like how you're able to make reading paragraphs of nothing but "telling" fun.
| ChinchillaCat chapter 26 . 12/9/2022
I know this is way late but I want to see her finally get to got to that rave! :D
| ChinchillaCat chapter 21 . 12/9/2022
So many damn feels. I wasn’t ready for all these damn tears and feelings. Whhhhyy? But in all seriousness this is an amazing chapter. Thank you for taking me on this journey.
| Mimi chapter 20 . 12/9/2022
Their dreams are just so sweet and heartbreaking. Love it. Thank you!
| Le Visiteur chapter 1 . 10/18/2022
it's the third Time i've read this story. i read it once when it was coming along and i was soooo young. still one of, if not my favorite Naruto OC fanfic. i know how reviews can warm you Heart, so i just thought why not now ? your writing style is Amazing to me, nevermind haters. a lot of people bristle in the comments, arguing with Logic. but i think you have a wonderful grasp on what emotions are, and how illogic they make us. thank you for this story, once again, and be proud 3