Awesome love it, (:

I love your story! This new side of ryushi is also nice dramatic unexpected and dramatic. I like it. I wanna see her change the world. Whether for good or bad remains to be seen

Wow, I just discovered you story and read it in 3 hours... It's currently past 2AM.

I love your OC! She's... unique. It's refreshing to only have bits of her (quite interesting) "past", and how her mind is shattered. Plus I love her shocking & inapproriate humor, I laughed out loud a lot of times! ;-)

Now this last chapter gives me the chills... 'cause it's sad if it's really what she think. I hope that's she's still lying to herself about one thing: her attachment to "her boys". These three are just the best trio ever. I so don't want Ryuishi to betray them, even if seeing her interact with Konoha would be quite interesting...

Well, sorry for rambling so much. Let me just say again that I really enjoy this story, even the grim and violent side that sometimes made me go "ewww", because it's well-written and quite realistic.

May your inspiration always flow! :3

Can you explain what she did to her face? Did she use makeup or something? Great chapter btw

Little shark spirit in Indonesian is not kecil hiu roh. It's roh hiu kecil. good story btw

Really loving the story the last part reminded me about this song title I heard.
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Well... fuck man, after the amusing 2nd last chapter and somewhat average in mindfuckery of the last this hit a bit hard hitting. I wonder if she'll ever have an end game that ends up well for Kisame and Zabu-chan, and if she'll go through that whole emotional rollercoaster flashback trauma become a good person thing Naruto loves to hit people with. Anyway, another well written if kinda fucking depressing chapter, I'm excited for the next one, Mahal out.

I can't help but wonder how these 2 will differ from their canon versions in the end. What effect will her meeting with Naruto will bring. Will she attempt to mind rape Naruto into tears or something else?

I have the strangest picture of me sitting and staring at a poop for a few minutes. Reading poop.
... You really fucked me up now. What if books were poop? Imagine a library. Or a school. Children stare at poop all day and then bring home a piece as homework so they can sit by the kitchen table and stare some more while their parents cook dinner. I'm very fucking sorry (and at the same time not) for typing this.

Anyways, I never noticed this side of Ryuishi during the story and puts me in a whole new perspective of her. She's a real survivor. Love her. And your story. And you.

XOXO

Gah I love this chapter. So far, we've seen the better parts of Ryuishi, while this gives us a glimpse into the darker aspect of her personality. This explains so much of Ryuishi, and really highlights how fascinating her mindset is. I like how you did her mindscape, I know you wanted to do a liar's palace thing and though I had no idea what that was this gave me a pretty good idea. Anyways, nice chapter!

I'm curious about her warpaint... What does it look like? Can we have a picture or a very detailed description? :

Love and Kisses

Always pleasant to have an update. I believe there should be other canon characters introduced soon (it doesn't have to be super important ones), because I feel like there aren't enough appearances of canon characters.

This chapter had me laughing

Another amazing chapter! I love how both Zabuza and Kisame care enough to train her to be stronger, even though their outward actions might not seem like it. I feel like when she eventually does realize that this is her world and there is no going back to her past life, she might lose it. I mean she's already pretty unstable and living in Kiri doesn't really help. I'm kind of thinking ahead but will there be a possible love triangle, or will Kisame just be a friend or like a brother? Well even if there was a love triangle I'm not really sure whose side I would be on, they're both so adorable! I really love how you switch the povs sometimes, it gives insight into characters like Kisame since I would usually have no idea what exactly he would be thinking, he's too mature. Thanks for the chapter!

Chapter 17 was the most funniest damn thing I have ever read! Like seriously I had tears leaking from my eyes and now I have a bad side but it was well worth it xD