Reviews for Of the River and the Sea
c00chieCrisp chapter 10 . 2/18/2015
Omg these two are such little assholes.
SM3LLY chapter 1 . 2/18/2015
gosh they are such cute little psychopaths.
othergirls chapter 10 . 2/17/2015
I love your delightful, traumatized, itty bitty adult. Zabuza's scaring the hell out of everyone with his demon chakra and she decides to taunt him. Clearly, that's an excellent decision that could not possibly draw more attention to her.

I feel like poor Ryuishi deserves any and all advantages you can give her, so long as they're more or less plausible. Like glasses. There are plenty of Naruto characters that get glasses. She could totally have her own. Just, you know, not in Mist. At least not right now.

It didn't feel rushed to me. Fast-paced, yeah, but not unreasonably so. Obviously I can't tell you how to feel about things, but I feel like the pacing on this chapter probably didn't bother any of your readers.
Flameoflegend chapter 10 . 2/17/2015
Oh my god that was hilarious.
crazy1person2you3been4warned chapter 10 . 2/17/2015
I don't think it's rough, it's a side scene. Like still is part of the story but it's more to get you to understand the characters than to continue the story. I like their relationship, I really fear the moment that Ryuishi starts getting hit on. Can you see how possessive Zabuza would be?
sleepy gold chapter 10 . 2/17/2015
I don't think it's Mary Sue at all. Ryuishi has been chilling about contemplating the world she's in. She's bound to have picked up a thing or two. I like her relationship w/Zabuza. Their closest relationship seems to be with one another in a way thats like, nobody else can keep up so I GUESS you'll do.

Hiding things in plain sight is her secret skill. It's so unexpected but I love it? The amount of food she keeps on her person is both sad and amusing.

She just doesn't give a damn that they're freaks and tussles with him at the end, what a weirdo! Thanks for the update
Yoran or something chapter 10 . 2/17/2015
that was cute
llat-2 chapter 10 . 2/17/2015
Ryuishi is going to need that chakra control if she wants to keep herself alive. Thanks for the update.
lilyoftheval5 chapter 10 . 2/17/2015
I can sort of feel why you are unhappy with the chapter, but it is still a good one. With interesting revelations and plot development.
Singular Poisonous Ashes chapter 10 . 2/17/2015
There is no such thing as Mary Sues. Only bad writing. You're writing isn't bad, no worries at all! Please, keep up the good work. :)
Sin of the Fallen chapter 9 . 2/16/2015
Cool premise! I'm eager to see more from Ryuishi.
Guest chapter 9 . 2/14/2015
I love this story.
lilyoftheval5 chapter 9 . 2/16/2015
Really interesting characters and characterizations.
Very enjoyable!
Kiki's Stories of Awesomeness chapter 9 . 2/13/2015
1- Will Haku still appear as his tool too.
2- Will she get to live through his slauter of the other students?
3- Your story is still amazing, and i demand a swift update!
othergirls chapter 9 . 2/13/2015
Holy shit Mist fucks everyone up so much. A job depicting an absolutely miserable country purposefully and systematically destroying itself. Also Ryuishi cuddling Zabuza for heat is part weirdly kinda adorable and part just sad and I love it.
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