Reviews for Of the River and the Sea |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Umm, so please tell me this is the beginnings of Zabuza/OC? It seems like it, and I'm starting to get excited as to the direction you will take, but I also don't want to get my hopes up... Regardless, I really love this story. The violence is great, there's some good character development, and I love how you've gone more in depth with Kiri. Cheers |
![]() ![]() ![]() Zabuza has yet to slaughter the entire class then? Ryuishi better hold back a lot so that she isn't in his graduating class y'know. |
![]() ![]() ![]() And now baby Zabuza is here. This pleases the soul. |
![]() ![]() How can you keep on typing out these amazing chapters in just a couple of days? You're like a factory set on AWESOME! So, yeah. I think Of the River and the Sea is my number 1 fav fanfic of all time. Keep on the good work! XOXOXO |
![]() ![]() It was zabuza ? O.O Inreally love the way you write this n.n |
![]() ![]() Nice chapter.I like both the povs. keep updating and thank you |
![]() ![]() Dude, this story is amazing. I especially love seeing other points of views on your character. God, Zabuza you freak. I love it. Him being possessive over a girl he's never talked to is a surprise, but in a good way. Wonder what he'll think of her tattoo/marks. Hanako was a sweet point of view. I imagine years from now Ryuishi hearing those rumors about her and laughing her head off. It was genius, what she did-uniting all those kids and allowing them to work together in surviving rather than only themselves. I reaaally love this story. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() OMFG! I laughed so hard at this! Like so hard I cried and almost peed myself and I love you so much! Can't wait for more. |
![]() ![]() Beautiful story. Keep writing and updating fast |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is definitely one of my favorites. It's really original, and really well written. There was never a point in the story where I was anything less than enthralled, which takes some doing. Thank you for writing this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Will we see Hanako and the orphans again or will they manage to stay safe in the shadows? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved that you showed Hanako's point of view! Oh, and ZABUZA. That is all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() For some reason I can see a fight for Ryuishi between Kisame and Zabuzza for her affection, in the right way affection can be used in conjecture with them, but still its going to be interesting how the three's relationship is going to be like. |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it, it's not often where people are willing to throw any dirty trick to win a fight and I wish more authors included those in their fics. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful! Ryushi might've been the inevitable loser but she had the 'gut' to try. And poor Kisame that had to be the most humiliating fight he's won in his life. Ya know for some reason I can see Zabuza sharpening his with Ryushi's fighting tactics in mind. (When he saw her kill that one guy.) Just a thought but this is after Zabuza's kill spree right? Update when ya can, RR out. :3 |