Reviews for Of the River and the Sea |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is really great! I hope to read more soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another self-important insert, yuck |
![]() ![]() Terumi Mei perhaps? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just started your story tonight(for me anyway...) and i must say, AWESOME! If i can still guess who saw her,ive gotta say, 1-Zabuza 2-Kisawme 3-Haku |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this chapter. I'm assuming you're talking about dissociative identity disorder? People don't like to acknowledge mental illness as a real things, so the fact that you devoted an entire chapter building up your OC's issues is definitely refreshing. Liking this story more and more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is she going to join up with Zabuza and Haku? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update? Update please? I think Zabuza would get along with her better. After all there has to be a reason why he felt the need to help Haku. Kisame? Hmm, curious about the child who beat a grown man? Also depends on which age group ya put her in. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is it Kisame or Zabuzza that saw her? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kisame or Mei Terumi perhaps? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is it weird that I like this side of your character? You've shown a side of brutality without making it seem forced. Nice job |
![]() ![]() There are only three chapters and I need more! D: This really tickled my interests and I hope that you will keep up the great work that you are doing! Much Love LeechPrincess |
![]() ![]() Mmmm...this seems to be promising, and I really like the fact that she's not going to be yet another oc born and raised in Konoha, makes thing more interesting ) hope to see Kisame soon (love that guy!), is it too much for me to hope for him to make an appearance in the next chapter? XD looking forward to your next update, ciao |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha this is really funny! Your OC is interesting, and I'm excited to see more of her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this chapter was great! I'm really looking forward to this story; can't wait for more ;P |
![]() ![]() ![]() Read the section in the ToS on self inserts. Nobody likes them BTW. |